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Purple Dawn Till Dusk : dearest through the time

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Autor: jikanyotomare

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***All chapters marked- (edited) have been edited by Larkspur and Aoi_Tenshi

Late At Night-

"Cancel your engagement with my stepsister and marry me" Senja said brazenly.

Xiao Tianyou looked at the little girl in front of him with amusement, "But, why should I marry you?"

Senja tilted her head to one side and smirked coquettishly, "Because I am smart and beautiful. Moreover, I know how to find Gong Xu"

"Why do you think I care about this Gong Xu guy?" He asked with a cold voice.

"Of course, you care! He was the one who killed your wife."

Xiao Tianyou glared at her with menacing eyes. His thin lips shut tight before he spoke in a low and hoarse voice. "Are you threatening me?!"

"I wouldn't dare!" She feigned fear and continued, "Let’s call this ‘relationship with benefit’."

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She was a cunning and haughty professional thief from modern era. Together with her three brothers, she stole whatever ‘requested’. However, Senja was sent back to ancient time by an elderly woman to find someone named Yun. Only by finding him could she come back to her era.

Once she arrived there, people from the kingdom’s army claiming that she was a daughter of a formidable clan of spies who had been kidnapped for a year.

*How could that be??*

She was sure that she hadn't occupied someone else’s body, so how could she have become a brilliant divine girl with virtuous conduct and noble demeanor, who had also saved the country?

*Hmm...*

Resolve this by feigning amnesia then... hee-hee...

So, she can fake a memory loss, but can she keep up to HER reputation?! Especially since their personalities are poles apart!

Then there’s the overprotective grandfather of hers who has forbidden her from stepping out of the manor lest she be kidnapped again!

Grr..………How can she start looking for this Yun guy if she can't go outside?

There’s just one way!

Marry the military commander a.k.a, the Second Prince, Xiao Tianyou.

Argh!!!…….. he is the fiancé of her vicious stepsister!!

*A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Everything is going against me!*

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    jikanyotomare

    hiii, author here... i would like to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. cough... well, like wise men say, you should proud of whatever you do... i would like to thanks everyone who give the effort to read this story and if you don't mind, could you please leave me a review or comments, i would love to read it. i would quotes what minions said. "I'm not addicted to reading, i can quit as soon as i finish one more chapter" cheer readers^^

    5yr
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    QingChuanChuan101

    I really love this story....but the reason why i gave it 4 stars was that the ML already has a son, it would have been fine if he had a wife before but it was just i don't like one of the main characters having their children with another.

    5yr
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    AK_1
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    I give it full marks... Here the author is learning n improving and trying to provide a good story. I suggest if you don't read the novel completely and just depend on mistakes in synopsis then don't review!! "U R Not Eligible to Review" or Comment in such a way that encourages Author!! This is my first Novel Review in webnovel and am happy to review this Novel. As the author is well aware of his/her mistakes and working on it, I wish author Good Luck..👍🙂 Dear author, the story is good and interesting, keep up the good work. 🙂

    5yr
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    StenDuring

    This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 96. We have some kind of black ops female who's transported to another world, or possibly our own history. It's quite unclear which. After transport she gains the ability to forcefully hypnotize people. The setting she arrives in is an ancient military force with a rather unclear empire attached to it, and I mean in in that order. The initial setting is a beseiged fortress which is on the verge of being overrun while the main character is worried about having her timely bath and a decent meal. In the end it does get overrun. Worry not, the cavalry arrives like in some old B-western movie and the fortress is saved. For absolutely no reaon at all the entire cast is relocated to some diffuse elsewhere since a fortress worth attacking apparently isn't worth manning after a succesful defence. The second arc of the story is an endless infodump delivered in the form of dialogue while the reader slowly is fed hints that this might also be a reverse harem. The last twenty chapters published this far revolves around some assassination attempt which devolves into a prison break. Did I mention that this story is labelled as romance? Now for the stars. Writing: Two stars. The English used is subpar to the degree that it acts as an efficient wall preventing the reader from accessing the story. Tenses are all over the place, and while there seems to be a point of view I honestly can't guess which. Third person anyway. Words are ususally spelled correctly, which would have been fine if they were actually the words that were supposed to go into that slot in the sentence. Updates: Five stars. Solid. Story: Three stars. Well, there's a plot going somewhere. It's thoroughly broken by multiple chapters of infodumping inserted randomly, and there's very little logical coherence between arcs. But it's still definitely going somewhere. Characters: Two stars. They have names, which is good. Apart from the main characters I desperately need those names, or I would have no idea about who's doing what. Our female main character is the only one with a personality. World: Four stars. In this case it's actually not praise. There's huge and massive amounts of world background, and it all comes as endless dialogues hiding the infodumps. Well over a fourth of the content is world background, and it's delivered with the elegance of a gorilla going berserk in a high class restaurant. But, in the end, there's lots and lots and lots of world background. Lastly, this story desperately needs an editor, and given the 96 chapters published I'm not convinced about the romance label.

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    5yr
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    PoppyQueen

    I really like your story, however, I spotted some grammatical mistakes through the text which sort of diverted my attention from the story(I have the same issues in my story. Kind of trying to correct them bit by bit). Other than that, your story is almost impeccable.

    5yr
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    Ouhbaba

    I lost brain cells just from reading the synopsis. Come on Author, at least try to make me believe that maybe you put some effort into it...

    5yr
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    2loveu

    If you don't want to read a spoiled, glutton and a good-for-nothing female protagonist skip this one and find another. You'll be dissapointed if you do

    5yr
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    QCY
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    Wow. I'm pretty surprised there are actually upvoted reviews that I actually agree with talking (in general) about the issues of books written by amateurs and people unfamiliar to English. The writing quality and character development are all over the place, which I've noticed in multiple Original novels and has seriously quite a few of my brain cells. In fact, I've been quite dissatisfied with the whole "write your own novel" thing on this website because a ton of books (like every single one) really didn't meet proper quality and came out just to kill the brains of people who read it. I used to like this website due to the fact that it only featured translated novels (which are in fact, are edited), but with that new update, the quality of this website has dropped down by a whole lot.

    4yr
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    Ji_Yidao

    I'm sorry but... What??? The grammar and typos make this so hard to read. Granted it's not as bad as MTL but as a novel in general it's pretty awful. Other than that the novel is average at best.

    5yr
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    king_z
    LV 11 Badge

    i just finish reading the last chapter and i thought i will give it a try to this novel, the story develop with slow pace but it make me more understand point of view the MC... i hope the author didn't drop the novel.

    5yr
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    Purpledash

    So far the best wuxia novel i have read after chaos in beauty.straight to the point,no beating around the bush story line as some novel tend to drag story without resolution as to where its going making some readers lise interest.I'll give this a thumbs up thought just a suggestion some of the statement needs to improve its grammar and tenses..Above all I really enjoyed reading this..thank u author

    4yr
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    kojimamiharu

    This might be a bit long 🤓 The FL is not someone you meet in other webnovels. She has realistic character and cute straightforward demeanor you'll see in today's society, and this is considered a unique mixture between ancient chinese background (i suppose) and millenials story. I can't help laughing about Senja's action and also Tianyao's (i hope i wrote in right) reaction. Furthermore: • You'll find the novel is easy to read despite of minor grammar error (it does'nt bother me at all though) • The scenes are flowing, the way author describes everything really turns me on to read more and more and more. I can easily imagine what kind of scene is happening in every chapter which is kind of rare to find in this webnovel universe. • Although some details is not quite fit, the way author let the story goes is worthy to be appraised, he/she's able to draw our intention to the book. It's a nice talent i think • I haven't finished reading this book, since I'm such a low-budget student, so everything I can do is just log in everyday, and (force my self to) satisfy my daily supply of Senja and Tianyao little by little. But i can assure you, the SS price is totally reasonable. Approximately around 3-6SS per chapter, and you won't be dissapointed in each purchases. • Finally to conclude this review; YOU WILL LOVE IT! It's been a while since I lost my interest in reading webnovel's ebook after Ning Xi's and duo buns ended, but this novel DEFINITELY draws my attention and amazement. Can't wait to finish it! That's all from me, giving you a hug from Indonesia, thor ❤ Hope I can read your other masterpieces ❤❤❤

    4yr
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    climbers

    Hiii... i would like to review my friend work here. She show me a couple of chapters of this story and i love it! It story tells about transmigration and psychology, not like many other transmigration story that the MC couldn't back to their era, here she could back to her own era after she finished her mission. I like transmigration story with black belly MC and unpredictable plot story. If you have the same like as me, you should give a try to this novel. My friend would love it read what you guys thought about her novel. Cheers,

    5yr
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    bluikaa
    LV 11 Badge

    Hello Author! I wanted to say that I just finished the book and ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!! I already miss the characters:( I wish you luck as you write! You are amazing!!!!! I hope this is an encouragement to you 💕 Love, Bailey

    3yr
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    yanashucute

    I wish I can be like senja who so confident full of emotion cunning and will lash back when someone bully her with bad trick.. I love tiaonyou for his love for senja.. I like them both.. Senja parent and brothers.. They so protective and lovely... Thank you writer

    4yr
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    anesu_mautsa

    By far the best thing i have read on this app. Story plot ws so captivating tht its so easy to overlook th grammar mistakes. All characters had life.. They were not just background characters and the way the author managed to tie it all up together is simply amazing. Thank u for gracing my eyes w this beautiful story

    4yr
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    Ram111

    I really like this novel. Story progresses quite nicely and FL is hilarious. ML too is really my type. However the grammar does bother me sometimes. It will be one of the best novels if author could correct that.

    4yr
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    EMMA_OBEROI

    This is so good. I have always been looking for a different story and here it is. I just loved it. This is so interesting. This is the best novel.

    4yr
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    zfyx
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    Hiiiiii😃 heheh btw I'm Syzerr but this is my sec acc. naubusan kasi ako ng ST sa isa kung acc.😂 atsaka naka lock nakasi yung ibang chptr so gumawa ako ng bagong acc para may ST akow😂😂 ahm btw Ms.A your story is very cool and excellent i really like it especially the attitude of the FL hahaha she's v-genius, sometimes funny, and she's v-cool too & always have her posture i really envy that kind of girl hahahha yun lng masasabi ko😂 keep updating coz it's v-worth it😊

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    5yr
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    sumit1234

    Very nice plot, very interesting story and the way the are going,very unlike to other travel era story...here female lead travel to ancient time own body almost naked😉 purple hair 😁 And name senja , Fortunately or unfortunately a girl senja already in that era and went missing. They think our modern senja is that ..but what to do. ..huge personality turn ..apart from.. loving grandfather every one think as imposter but mind it she never claimed that she that senja ... She send by her grand maa from modern time on mission ... please read the story...funny and addictive story You will like it Must must read

    5yr
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