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Star Wars: Rise of the forgotten clan
4.32 (23 Bewertungen)
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After the destruction of his clan a lone warrior makes his way through the galaxy.
Starts before the battle of Naboo, the mc will work as a mercenary as he tries to rebuild his clan while dealing with a galactic civil war.
(This is my first time writing and I am dyslexic so sorry if there are any mistakes.)
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very short Chapter Mci is the lame "i want to protect everyone" of course with dead Family its not hard to find something better
So author deleted all the lower and mir star reviews and kept all high ones tp boost rating. Even if low star is deserved. Kinda pathetic. Ig you jabe to resort to that then maybe tru and do better instead of tricking people. Story went no where is mostly canon af amd mc stays kid forever
So far it's really enjoyable to read, the story is progressing nicely while altering some stuff from the og starwars storyline, I like that the mc has a goal even while being young and that he is finding people, like the girls and yaddle to join him, the history behind the clan is cool even if it's kinda like you're just copying the gray factio jedi and mixing it with the mandolorians. Otherwise it's cool and I'm exited for the basebuilding that's coming up
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Mostly what want to say about this story is that it's mostly just copy and paste of Star Wars with the addition of the MC. There are some parts/chapters that are original, but the amount pales in comparison to the copy-paste chapters. That and the fact that random girls are being thrown in almost every chapter just for "harems" sake. Overall it's a cool idea but not well executed. I hope that in the future it could get better, and it's not to the point I'm averse to the story, but it's just not what I was looking for in a Star Wars fanfiction.
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not bad so far. grammar is ok, so that's a plus, but we do seem to have a cliche moment a female is pyshed into the story. just seems like a nieve kids raised by robots. works have been great until the author forced the girl into it and he didn't even turn in the criminal for bounty or sell the ship...
Rating this as of 10 chapters, love the story so far. like the concept alot, hope the other keeps up the updates and good work 👍🏼
I like the global story, but the MC is stupid and too naive. He want to revive his clan, but he is too credule and overprotective with strangers
Just wanna say love the story, I’m not the best at expression through words…… just know that this story makes me feel happy and I hope you continue writing at your own pace *cough* *cough* unless you happwn to be inspired to put up 2 chapters sometimes ;)
this is by far my favorite star wars fan fiction and I want him to be with that last mandiloren sister with the violent tendencies and the pacifist one to have a child with obi wan
I gave you a 5 star in all review because you deserve it. your story is great it is one of the best star wars novels i have read in a long time.THANK YOU ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Great novel so far especially with the rise of his clan. I am looking forward to seeing how he will continue to build his trade guild and how much further he will expand his shipbuilding + raising his army.
This is a good story please continue and don't drop, I love how you portray Ren I hope he uses the force more to his advantage and when is he going to have his own lightsaber?
A start to an amazing fanfic. Not many star wars fanfics, even less that are decent or havent been dropped. im happy to say this Gem doesn't fall in that category. I love the MC so far and the development of the story. its still coming together, the bigger picture of this story, and where it'll head but still worthy of a 5 star rating at this point. Keep up the good work.