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Draugzel
male LV 6Too many ideas with no willpower to implement them.
2017-11-24 Beigetreten GermanyAbzeichen 7
Moments 260
Yeah, sorry. It was November when I wrote this. So the next few chapters...
ch 59 Remedios Custodio
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Yeah, it is confusing. I have a tendency to include double negatives. I am trying to work on my clarity of word usage, but sometimes I overlook stuff like that. So, I do appreciate you pointing it out.
Although it wasn't a sight that was unfamiliar to her, she couldn't help but feel her heart drop. Tears ran down her skin at the condition of this unfamiliar man. She couldn't recognize the other, but she still felt a deep-seated anguish for the suffering he had gone through. The anguish turned into pure hatred unprecedented to what she had felt before.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Thank you :)
He entered the hut, attracting the attention of the ones inside, though he was sure they were just waiting for him to tell them where the prince was. "The prince will be coming soon." He announced, which left Tatsumaki to open her mouth before closing it again, while Shalltear turned red. Probably because she was imagining the prince at this moment.
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
*unfamiliar -> meaning she is familiar to such a sight, but her heart dropped anyway...
Although it wasn't a sight that was unfamiliar to her, she couldn't help but feel her heart drop. Tears ran down her skin at the condition of this unfamiliar man. She couldn't recognize the other, but she still felt a deep-seated anguish for the suffering he had gone through. The anguish turned into pure hatred unprecedented to what she had felt before.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Ah, I got it. Yeah, I can do that. It is something I usually forget, so it was already something I was trying to fix. Thanks for the input.
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Bro, are you pranking me? The only messages I get from you are whether I get it... or you are writing something so heinous that it gets instantly deleted...
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
If it was a suggestion for a new fanfic, I can already tell you that I am not going to write a new one anytime soon.
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Still nothing. Probably it's being censored by wn, nothing appears in my inbox or when I open the comments. Try to reply to this comment and tweak some of the words you choose that might get removed.
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Sorry but the comment doesn't Show up for me. What was it?
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Unlikely as I hadn't really thought about it.
ch 111 Disappearance
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
A plan after, you mean like another story? Not until I finish my other story, Prince of Nazarick.
A/N: As a heads up, I will be ending the story soon. Perhaps in the next few chapters, might take another 10 chapters or so.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
I have some ideas for different stories, but I probably won't start anything until I finish my Overlord fanfic.
A/N: As a heads up, I will be ending the story soon. Perhaps in the next few chapters, might take another 10 chapters or so.
Just Saiyan (DBZ/DC)
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
the divine domain gives you knowledge about everything inside it and as long as it has energy, one has access to it to change anything inside. Basically a sphere around him that makes him almost invincible, almost all-knowing, and allows him to change reality to a certain degree.
It still wasn't qualified to be called a divine domain, but it already showed signs of giving me omniscience and omnipotence once it reached its full potential. Even now, minor details couldn't escape my awareness. I didn't need to sense, hear or see anything.
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
First
ch 29 Justice and Evil
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
You don't have to worry about me dropping a story. It was because some authors just quit stories I liked that I started writing. I won't drop something over a comment. Maybe if no one read the ff or I am dead then I would discontinue it. Either way, thanks for stepping up.
ch 28 Invasion
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Gagaran is a woman... She is not going to be a 'target' if that is what you are asking. And don't worry, I get that it was just a recommendation and even if it wasn't that doesn't really affect me or my decision as I have other things in mind for this novel. I appreciate the enthusiasm, though.
ch 28 Invasion
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
What the manga is about. I have read your other comment. I won't insert any other NPCs as we are already too far into the story, especially if they had an important function as you described. Tatsumaki, I might add because she is related to Fubuki and I could see the Player creating both as a package deal, but I already thought I had added too many characters already, so I am not inclined to do it.
ch 28 Invasion
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
That is kind of the point why the mc is confused and doesn't know when something happened. The timing isn't specified just that it happened in Tatsumakis lore. Since it doesn't appear in Azazel's there is a mismatch in their lores, so the NPCs interpret their lore into a fabricated mismatched timeline. What the mc doesn't know is that the first thing mentioned goes and the npcs would have just accepted it as a truth
'Actually, I never talked to you before in the game.' Of course, I didn't say that, but it was true. According to her, the timeline should be something like this: Tatsumaki being my secret weapon -> me getting married to Albedo -> we get a new house -> ranting about Albedo -> spying on me in the bedroom -> ranting about the Supreme Beings -> reveal and then imprisonment.
Prince of Nazarick [Overlord]
Anime & Comics · Draugzel