Its late and stuff.. but why does he keep adding patterns to his beam.. why not just focus on speed.. like if he hits a small part of the target its basically immobilizes them he has free hit.. why focus on making patterns in his disk?
ch 11 Ch 11 - Training Timeskip
Anime & Comics · Wistful_Sam
Only gripe i have about this is his seemingly infinite energy as he just keeps throwing beam after beam, like... Is he a stamina monster or is the devil fruit just costless? In most fics uaing devil fruit usually eats stamina or physical strength.. what gives??
ch 0 8 Ch 08 - The Skirmish
Anime & Comics · Wistful_Sam
Discovered this story recently.. so when i saw the update gap, i didnt really feel it.. its like youve been here all the time for me 🤣
ch 39 39 - "End" of the battle
Movies · NunuXD
How daheck did she guess hes from the future just from describing something from a movie.... where did the leap of logic come from... and i dont even know if shes serious or not... makes the scene feel so ditached... im gonna read a few more chapters.. but im already thinking of dropping this
ch 0 8 I, a Former Soldier, Cannot Even Do a Single Push-up.
Anime & Comics · R4IN
Continuity is too confusing.. its just one scene from the next.. i cant even picture the scene happening...
ch 0 3 Choosing(2). Granny and Sister Melo *
Anime & Comics · X_x_INFINITY_x_X
Its good if you stick to the direct writing style consistently, theres also a trick in which to drop hints in this type of storytelling.. im still reading it as of today im at ch 39.. the following 2 chapters from this chapter i filled me in with what i was missing. which is fortunate because im binge reading. But if i was reading it when it was releasing, id have waited a day or two and wouldve lost attention.. keep it up i look forward to your writing. It keepa me relaxed
ch 24 Peace and Future Again.
Anime & Comics · Gonshido
This chapter really makes me wanna drop it.. not because of the story.. just the way you write it. Some authors write in a way that has a little bit of foreshadowing thats not noticeable, something very subtle. but with your writing style that is quick and to the point(which isn't bad) it just doesnt subconsciously prepare anyone for an acceptable twist.. that it just leaves me hanging with a weird sense of disappointment.
ch 24 Peace and Future Again.
Anime & Comics · Gonshido
I miss the days when a system is just a system... novels nowadays give the system too many annoying features.. what ever happened to work with what you got.. now even the system can be begged for anything... makes the system lose its uniqueness and mystery if any host can just bargain with it.
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Anime & Comics · Sennengoroshi
Take a break dude.. you've been updating in great speeds lately that this new chapter is full of awkward mistakes. Example... when he said he didnt experience men???? Like whut.. it just sounds gay, proper response should have been "you just havent seen someone as unique as me" Also stopped reading at halfway point of this chapter cause im sleep deprived and dont wanna confuse myself so id check back on this tomorrow... nyt
ch 46 Chapter 46
Anime & Comics · blazuki
Ahhh the weab is strong in this one....
I once had a flame war in the komi manga comment section and told the troll to write a story which contains what his preferred version of komi should go... and i hope that wasnt you cause im liking this version and i dont wanna admit im wrong to a stranger on the internet.
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Too much shacking and not enough shaking.. seriously though.. it keeps catching me off guard... brings me out of my reading groove
ch 0 3 They were a nice pair of tits, though.
Anime & Comics · KindaWeirdChampBro
This chapter was simply an orgasmic read
ch 134 Reuniting.
Anime & Comics · Andrew_Nguyen_5695
A 2 year old dead fanfic.. had a lot of potential.. it makes me cry finding these 😭
ch 12 CH XII
Fate Factory: A Certain Emiya in Fantasy Harvest Moon
Anime & Comics · Abbeysensei