this is basically a copy and paste of jbubu story reign of the new protogenoi. you should probably mention that too.
you're definitely a good writer. i will probably give this a chance if you make it to at least the first giant war. this is the second or third story ive read with this concept. I'm hoping the mythology/main world doesn't get lost amongst the world hopping. I've read many a story where it starts jumping and the main world just kinda disappears and it just hops before it gets dropped. i hope you continue on and enjoy yourself hope to eventually read this story
its your story, however you are really underestimating lucifer. even the tv show he sent a full grown man flying with a simple push and basically ignores damage(when not near decker) and is only really weakened while in her presence. but even on the vampire scale the twilight vampires aren't even up there in regards to power with gifts making up the difference.
'H-How dare he! How dare he hurt MY Alice!' Lucifer thought with a snarl, as her eyes began to glow a blood red. Following after the downed vampire, she didn't give him a moment to respond before launching another punch to his stomach, throwing him into a nearby tree. A groan escaped Edward as he looked up and found Lucifer standing over him. While Lucifer was strong, her physical capabilities weren't as strong as a Twilight vampire, not yet at least.
Travels of the Daughter of God
Movies · ArtoriaPendragon_
this is bad. she is the daughter of god. and mortal vampires are stronger then her not counting the additional immortal buffs.
'H-How dare he! How dare he hurt MY Alice!' Lucifer thought with a snarl, as her eyes began to glow a blood red. Following after the downed vampire, she didn't give him a moment to respond before launching another punch to his stomach, throwing him into a nearby tree. A groan escaped Edward as he looked up and found Lucifer standing over him. While Lucifer was strong, her physical capabilities weren't as strong as a Twilight vampire, not yet at least.
Travels of the Daughter of God
Movies · ArtoriaPendragon_
honestly the fact your character is a divine being and instead of creating training that would kill mortals like and infinite gravity chamber for massive gains he is trying to create shortcuts is kinda ridiculous that by all means should be useless on a divine being.
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yeah its full of women that will peak his interest with the way the character is unique and powerful im all for ivy and harley.
(Sigh. Now I want Harley and Poison Ivy in the harem. DC truly is the treasure trove of powers, women, and villains.)
The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
seems like. I really enjoy yhis story so thanks anyway
fair but your characters attraction to quality women in a universe like DC he cant come outta there without one or four ladies for his horde not counting hexa
so many chance we can get a preliminary dc harem addition list
when did you allow the dao of cliff into the sect they only bring anarchy.
Twilight: Rebirth
Movies · DumbedDown