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You always end it in the best part, you leave open endings and after a week a chapter of 369 words... go up more, more more

well, that sandy guy is going to have an accident

I have no idea about grammar, I just know that when you learn to write in a different language, you write better than in your mother tongue, because when you write in English, for example, you don't put regional marks or words. There is the English of England, the United States and Australia, I don't know how many differences each one has because they have had their own settlements for so long that there are words that are written and spoken differently.

Thanks for the chapter, you are improving at writing, now you just have to add more articles like movies and something original of yours to make it a good fanfic, maybe you can make the world bigger by introducing more countries, ethnicities or whatever. In a Naruto movie, a very technologically advanced country for the time of Naruto attacks Konoha, perhaps you can introduce technological elements, for example Orochimaru has cloning technology...

I Want MORE... Tftc.

Thfc

It's late but I hate Sakura, she was totally useless and even abusive towards Naruto, not only was she useless all the seasons loving a traitor... even as a mother she is useless, her daughter came out with myopia, a short-sighted Uchiha, yes the clan Uchiha lived, she would be killed for ruining her blood

The dialogues are more important because they guide the plot and give it life.

I want more

Modernization would be a very good idea for the novel, imagine an airship and Greek fire raining down on the frozen zombies, plus the storm keep has an obsidian mine, in that world it is magical if I'm not mistaken, good for killing the undead.

Well, it would be good if Naruto decided with conviction not to be on the same team as them and for Kakashi to realize those problems, more for Sakura than the emo avenger.

He has already lost all the little hope.