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If they’re not close to eachother then what are you saying? Are you back tracking? Make sense
Akane was a fan of Allmight. After her experience of being kidnapped by a vile group of villains, Akane wanted to become a hero. Sadly she didn't make it in AU's entrance exam. Thus she gave up her dream and finished her studies. She then met her husband and gave birth to her son.
MHA: One-Hit Hero
Anime & Comics · Ilovefics
Japan is only so big dawg. There are four known hero highschools, UA being the number one in the East, and Shiketsu in the West. And then there are two other that we know about- do you really think they are located right next to eachother? Not to mention the others we don’t know about. Japan also uses the bullet train that allow much faster travel..
Akane was a fan of Allmight. After her experience of being kidnapped by a vile group of villains, Akane wanted to become a hero. Sadly she didn't make it in AU's entrance exam. Thus she gave up her dream and finished her studies. She then met her husband and gave birth to her son.
MHA: One-Hit Hero
Anime & Comics · Ilovefics
Why do you automatically assume the super soldier serum will even make him stronger? That’s just pouring a bucket of water into the ocean. He’s Viltrumite.
ch 19 19: First Encounter
Still Defiant! SI-OC [Marvel/DC]
Anime & Comics · EmmaCruzader
“Tsk I knew my idiot if a husband and daughter would do this” Explain how I made it up when it’s right there? You blind?
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MHA: Kibutsuji
Anime & Comics · TheFanBoy
Didn’t know that sorry and gl
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MHA: Kibutsuji
Anime & Comics · TheFanBoy
He knew they would abuse their kid? Thats such a specific thing for him to predict about them, why didn’t he stop it.
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MHA: Kibutsuji
Anime & Comics · TheFanBoy
Bro you’re allowed to use periods when writing, you don’t have to avoid them.
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MHA: Kibutsuji
Anime & Comics · TheFanBoy
are we*
Keeping a diary was the best solution.
Danmachi: I'm Getting Skills In The Dungeon!
Anime & Comics · heavenlydawn_
That’s crazy you have four siblings (idc)
"Do you think we could learn something from him?"
The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
Or idk if Elizabeth is his sister or friend but point still stands
His expression was infuriated but he couldn't stop his body as he fell to the ground, temporarily stunned.
Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
His homeland is in the middle of the air having a crisis, and and decides to electrocute the strong dude that’s able to fly and has the strength to help in rescue. “Hey Thor, can you fly around to help find my sister or find someone to?”….
His expression was infuriated but he couldn't stop his body as he fell to the ground, temporarily stunned.
Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
For example “My vision quickly returning as I looked around.” You wouldn’t say this by itself, it would be the follow up. “I got to my feet, my vision quickly retuning as I looked around.” Its okay to use past tense. “My vision quickly retuned as I looked around.” Or “My vision was quickly returning as I looked around”- if you ‘must’ stick to gerunds. If you do, there are so many YouTube videos that demonstrate how to use them.
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 10,000 Volts
Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
Your grammar was much better when you wrote the main character in third person. You keep alternating between present and past tense in sentences. Its like you’re trying so hard to keep it present tense but its not working. Otherwise the concept is cool
ch 0 3 Chapter 3 10,000 Volts
Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
And other places
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Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
I think you got a little excited writing this scene. The grammar is off here
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Lightning Devil Fruit In Marvel!
Movies · Karate_master_b
All he did was wake up from a quiet household and went to school. How tired must he be that he can’t even think straight…
"Congratulations on becoming a player," the screen read as he swiped it away and continued walking home. He was tired and dismissed it as his mind playing tricks on him in his exhausted state.
A player in Jujutsu Kaisen
Anime & Comics · Ppp_Pppp
But then it says that he only has the basics given to him. If Yuta was so strong to have a domain expansion he wouldn’t have only basics accomplished.
Domain Expansion: None
Marvel/Xmen:Yuta Okkotsu
Movies · Ash_D_Born