Prolific writer, aspiring author, bibliophile, and a wrestling fanatic. Love anything and everything to do with fantasy and storytelling.
2018-03-27 Beigetreten India
Will take note... Appreciate the feedback.
ch 274 Lethargy
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ha ha ha... I had the same thought flash by as I wrote drinking scenes. I thought it was only my mind that thought like that. Maybe, I will try to diversify a bit. Thanks for the input.
Duncan usually didn't care much about jewelry or weapons that most other people cared about. His mind was always on wine. But, it didn't mean that he was ignorant of the various top-rated items present in the world.
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks. I hope the following chapters give you the same enjoyment
ch 233 You call that killing intent!?
Eastern · kirupakaran
Nah, not happening... I can give an author's guarantee on that...
Duncan wasn't sure why he felt that way. It was an instinct to be honest to not let go off his sword when the deer had headbutted him. Just like how he had acted when he downed the wolf, this time was the same when the deer headbutted him. His instincts always guided him to act in the right way when he was in life and death situation.
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ah, there is a twist in it. Wasnt initially planned, but for convenience sale, I switched most names to Chinese for better flow. As for Duncan's name, a surprise is present in story, but it is a long wait...
Tang De told boggling Duncan altogether. He could hardly imagine how big they could be when he was told even small cities were dozen times bigger than the Starsinger Town he hailed from.
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks, I also like reading and writing about these enlightenment moments... However they are a chore to depict properly. Thoughts don't actually follow a set pattern. They jump from one thread to another. Especially when your mind is whirling fast. Trying to make them coherent was a little hardThanks for your appreciation
If that was the case, what ulterior motives did his master have? He had always known his master wasn't someone kind. There must be some reason for his master to act for a mortal. Moreover, his master's look when he walked out of the Grotto Heaven was telling as well. There was most likely to be something fishy regarding his disciplehood. What was it?
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ah, that was a decision that took me a long time to come to... At this stage, mc still has some misgivings from his mortal life. He hasn't completely shed his morality yet. He also hasn't completely embraced being a cultivator. As the story progresses, MC's character will change slowly and he will become more ruthless.
ch 192 Duncan, Heavenly Demon Sect
Eastern · kirupakaran
I felt that the bloodline has been used too frequently... Moreover these are fights within his capacity. In my mind, the MC must be forced to dig deep for him to activate his bloodline. At this stage, he still hasn't gotten full control over his bloodline and is only exploring the basics. But don't worry, the bloodline will be a major part as story progresses
ch 192 Duncan, Heavenly Demon Sect
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks for your patronage. Your support motivates me...
ch 195 Understanding the past
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks for your patronage. Your support motivates me...
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Cultivation is all about stealing
Eastern · kirupakaran
Its a function celebrated in November in India... We can consider it as your early wishes...
Once again, belated Diwali wishes to all...
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks for your encouragement...
ch 154 Risks and benefits
Eastern · kirupakaran
Thanks for your appreciation
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - Cultivation is all about stealing
Eastern · kirupakaran
I have reduced such things of late. My later chapters have a format of only putting the story out there...
This chapter is kinda special in how it turned out overall. I swear I never planned for this, but I am also glad that this chapter made a pretty impressive checkpoint both literally and figuratively as well.
Eastern · kirupakaran
True there... but inane means trivial or not interesting
Cultivators being strong enough to level cities and even kingdoms! Cultivators with powers to even control nature! Cultivators starting a war over some inane treasures! Don't even get him started about treasures. Really! Did the old fool really think him stupid enough to believe that there were treasures that could freeze land and even change the very climate?
Eastern · kirupakaran
Ha... I have had this doubt as a reader as well. As a writer, let me explain the mindset behind the words... The level of genius is determined by the person speaking. Here an ordinary mortal is speaking, so her exposure remains at that level. Later, sect disciples or other people in higher regions will say the same words. But their level of exposure will be bigger than the first one... It will carry on like this.. The higher the level the more exposure. what one considers genius may not be universally applicable...
"You shouldn't be worried about fighting the kid. What you should be worried about is how to survive that kid. Even though he is a kid, he is a cultivator. Not to mention that he is a once in ten thousand years genius. I called in here to warn you about the dangerousness of the job. Not for you to look down on it," the lady said in a serious tone causing Duncan to pause in confusion.
Eastern · kirupakaran
True... but the MC is typically brash and as much as he tries to act cautious, sometimes it just comes out...
Something about the little twerp rubbed Duncan the wrong way.
Eastern · kirupakaran
MC didn't call Liang Tianye master after being made his direct disciple. That's disrespectful in cultivation culture. While Duncan doesn't know it, it only shows his inexperience... Hope that clears it up
"Good," Liang Tianye nodded his head hearing Duncan's words. "Know this, I hate repeating myself. And I absolutely loathe being disrespected. If you want to live long, do not make the mistake of disrespecting me even on accident, ever again."
Eastern · kirupakaran
An update will be coming in within the next week. I am planning to upload chapters in batches to ease the process.
ch 60 What is Cultivation?
Demon Immortal
Eastern · kirupakaran