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Please don’t follow canon and have Thalia end up as a tree. With Lucian there, he should be able to prevent anything bad like that from happening.

I hope Tiamat doesn’t end up with Bahamut. I’m not a fan of when the MC is being manipulated, so I want him to reject Tiamat completely.

I get that you are introducing new characters and showing that despite his power increase he is still weak, but be careful of having characters show up too much that completely overpower your MC. It can get annoying if the MC is looked down on too much and he can’t do anything about it yet. Other than that I’m enjoying the story and the growth he Cao Cao is showing.

Is it just me or is the story now moving at a snails pace? Each chapter lately has been mostly filled with inner dialogue or over explanations that don’t move the story forward.

I feel the same way, the story has been slowing down a great deal. Then again I’m not a fan of story arcs where the MC hides his identity so maybe it’s just me.

Even though it was part of his plans, they should fuck over Frozen Cloud. I never liked them in the original story

I really enjoyed this chapter, I like that you showed the perspective of Koujou and his family. I hope you continue showing his perspective as they finally arrive in the Land of Grass and how they feel about finding hope for their family.

I’ve been enjoying the story so far but the development with Fleur seems pretty rushed to me. Though I may have a bias because I’m not a fan of Fleur. Other than that, it’s an entertaining story

Too much drama these past few chapters. Also when you throw in Kai’s personality, I can no longer continue this story. You made Kai a very unlikeable character, let alone an MC.

End the fight, too many authors drag fights out. It gets boring and repetitive to read long fight sequences

Is Whitebeard going to get de-aged like Francisco so he can join the battle and spend more time with his crew?

Another Summer POV would be entertaining to read! Reading the POV of customers and the changes that are brought to their world that occur from what they buy/learn from the shop is always a great time.

Yeah this chapter was really annoying. Like James has killed Grendel, beat down Sirzechs, and then defeated Crom Cruach and then got him as a familiar, yet Odin still underestimates him? Doesn’t make any sense.

Pretty interesting so far, the only problem is the occasional mixing up of the female and male pronouns.

Hopefully with this the Yang Chen drama can start to recede. It’s been a bit too much these last few chapters and I’m ready to move past the drama and continue the plot.

I’m hoping for Rukia, Rangiku and Yoruichi for the harem

Great chapter, would love to see more chill chapters with Wilhelm and the guys

No matter how much sense it makes to kick her out of the harem (I’m fully on board for that, screw Sakura) the author most likely won’t do that. He’ll probably just punish Sakura sexually and the betrayal will just be forgotten, which I find disappointing.