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I left a review for the story itself that explains the obvious plot hole. But summed up, you are ignoring the fact they have been forcefully taken from the world and returned home twice now, and should that happen again, they'd be right there next to each other. Not to mention, the girls actually know he is alive cause the queen told them, so theyd know to return and leave a note. The only thing holding this semi together is the fact they can't leave the world with an active quest, which wouldn't be hard to manipulate, not to mention the fact that they can just ask other people to leave a note too.

Fantasy world and concepts. Mc gets guns, exosuits and other mechanical science items.... what's the point of the fantasy world then?

Here's a fantasy novel featuring endless magical paths and other cool things. So naturally let's make the MC mecha-boy and the magic will be a sideshow.

I'm sorry, no one is questioning how he left a besieged city suffering from ongoing attacks?

Err huge plot hole here. They can just return to their world when not on quests. Not to mention the likelihood of the world forcing them to leave due to an event on earth like the giants is high. Seriously author, if you wanted to break Aren up from the group, you should of thought I through more than this.

That's a counter intuitive line. Even with power, you still can't afford kindness. It could be used against you in so many ways. So you'll forever be in search of more power to allow a kindness you will never use. The trick is to only allow a kindness you have the power to back. Thus making our Mcs mindset and actions needlessly cruel in pursuit of the impossible. Be kind where you can, and ruthless where it is needed. Moderation, as in everything in life, is key.

These battle passes ruin the whole point of the battles.... way to kill your stories consistency with drama. Sad writing.

This author doesn't seem to have a large vocabulary or even understand the words they are using. Like adapt as a ranking instead of adept, or berserker for that matter.

If he was smart with the other murder, this wouldn't be a problem. He would have the healer ranker with him who could vouch for him. Instead, he mindlessly murdered her. This party was respectful to other rankers so this fight wouldn't have happened. So stupid.

Since the goal was Dom's slime, I understand him dying to get it. However, Elena's death was both pointless a potentially dangerous. She was asleep. She would have helped prove his story about Dom going back into the cave alone, and thus explain his disappearance easily. Now there's two missing people and he was seen going with one of them. He will have to make a story up about this whole thing and it will be questionable. After all, the longer a lie, the more its likely to have holes.

This whole setup is stupid. The Mc went from an old soul living again and using his knowledge to gain an advantage to a random moron with no thinking capacity. So frustrating to read.

You genuinely would be hard pressed to find a more weak-willed and soft minded MC. No control of his emotions and apparently his own body. Still throwing up and losing focus and control in the face of violence or death, despite witnessing and taking part in it multiple times. So frustrating to read.

Very anime-ish. Which is typical of weak to strong.

Making everything seem absolutely hopeless as a way to build up suspense means you really have to deliver on the follow through. Let's see if the author is good or makes this whole scene annoying and frustrating.

Impressive. Its a bit much for one skill, but way more balanced than other novels. The roar skill would be really balanced if it weren't for his health pool.

You genuinely could not have done a better job ruining a story trying to force growth on your characters and world. Well done. I am impressed with how quickly I've grown to not want to read anymore. Death for forced growth makes for poor plot. And revival scenes are nearly impossible to make good with how poorly this has all gone.