U lost the plot
ch 91 Battle Begins Chp 85
Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
Hypocrite yapping bum
After Ravel adds Asia to the Peerage, Riser observes his gains, but a system alert sounds in his mind. The robotic voice of the system announces, "Host, due to your constant plot changes, fate has intervened. The Canon will start 25 days earlier; now, you only have 3 days before Issei turns into a demon."
Anime & Comics · Mirko22
You should go back and change it in old chapters
Instead I will refer to them, and other individuals like the Fantastic Four and those along the lines of Captain America and Luke Cage, as EVO's or Evolved Humans.
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
There aren’t any yeah
ch 319 CHAPTER 311(State of America)
Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene
Only criticism I have is focus more on the plot and less on the nsfw
ch 130 DxD 0130: Spell Compression
Anime & Comics · Addyctive7
Not exactly a fair pick, both suck regardless tho
Savage grinned proudly, holding a woman of pure star fire in a bridal carry in his arms as if it were nothing, "Haha! Savage ALWAYS wins!"
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Bum responded to a comment 4 months ago thinking he’s important
After Ravel adds Asia to the Peerage, Riser observes his gains, but a system alert sounds in his mind. The robotic voice of the system announces, "Host, due to your constant plot changes, fate has intervened. The Canon will start 25 days earlier; now, you only have 3 days before Issei turns into a demon."
Anime & Comics · Mirko22
Are you gonna actually finish this or drop it too
ch 0 1 Chapter - 1
Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
That’s not a good idea tbh, something like a protection amulet or ring would be better. Rn he should wait till he can make it perfectly safe or just not have any weaknesses. Even then, they aren’t really fighters.
"An artificial Devil Fruit for each should please them, and I should also create one to feed to my U-Watch," I said, thinking aloud.
Anime & Comics · Herohero
If void doesn’t get vex mythoclast In their honor im going to touch you
ch 88 Kabr The Legionless
Video Games · Writers_Ablood
Sean was like 10% of it the rest was vandal savage
ch 50 45: To Spark a Star
Anime & Comics · Daddy
This is a lie
Savage grinned proudly, holding a woman of pure star fire in a bridal carry in his arms as if it were nothing, "Haha! Savage ALWAYS wins!"
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Nope
Savage grinned proudly, holding a woman of pure star fire in a bridal carry in his arms as if it were nothing, "Haha! Savage ALWAYS wins!"
Anime & Comics · Daddy
we don’t like him
I chuckled, "He's an acquired taste but he does grow on you. C'mon, let's make sure we're the first friendly faces Kori sees instead of her slightly estranged sister and a savage, overwhelming immortal."
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Not needed and generally ruins majority of stories unless done perfectly right
[AN: Black Alice isn't slated to be in the harem. I have her pegged as a sort of spunky, sarcastic, and rebellious teenage daughter role. Think Negasonic Teenage Warhead from X-Men lol]
Anime & Comics · Daddy
More bs from the author
Despite his relatively low power level, he wasn't a foe that could be easily matched. Not in the traditional way, at least. Then you add in his uncanny ability to cheat Death. And his horrifically unique mind, perspective, and willpower.
Anime & Comics · Daddy
No this is a lie. Batman just up and snapped his neck and killed him.
P.S. For the reason why Sean didn't immediately kill the Joker, I'll just raise one point. 'Cheating Death' is a quite literal canon ability the Joker has. For the Joker to stay dead, his death needs to be funny, ironic, or karmically appropriate in some way. Sean definitely can kill him (easily too) but the end of this chapter isn't as simple as Sean just letting him walk away like an idiot.
Anime & Comics · Daddy
What is the author smoking
I'll admit, it felt good to get a hit in on the Joker when my hands were tied like this. Especially with the way he nearly stumbled from Harley's shout. Hearing her talk to him like that must have been unthinkable. He turned back to look at her, just blinking in uncomprehending shock.
Anime & Comics · Daddy
Bad writing 💀
In an instant, the Joker's grin twisted into a dark sneer, "I hate it. I LOATHE this place and everything you want it to represent. I promise you this, Mr. Barkeep… I will see it brought to ruin. I will see this place destroyed. It and the dream you want it to stand for. And you'll thank me for it. Your final story will be all the sweeter with a bit of bitterness~"
Anime & Comics · Daddy
52 chapters and he still hasn’t escaped or mastered a single power, you ruined your own story by dragging it out too long and making it read like filler
ch 52 Chapter 52
Starting as a Class Five Mutant
Anime & Comics · Zaelum