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I skipped a few chapters. Could someone tell me why Wu Siduo noticed the MC in the first place? I know it's his second life and he was Shreek's student. But why did he have interest in the MC from the beginning? Tell me there is a good reason. Because I feel Wu Siduo's existence a bit annoying in this story. While his interactions aren't exactly bad, they are excessive. A good character can win readers' hearts with few, but well-written appearances. Wu Siduo is absolutely the opposite. To this point alone he already has more screen time than most love interests written by Tang Jia San Sao.

The best way to describe this author is as a muddled-minded individual. The story has decent writing and ideas. The problem is that the author gets lost in them. In terms of intelligence MC is even more stupid than Yun Che. The author forces us to eat several chapters showing the MC's pathetic past life, then make it seem like he is the most awesome and handsome guy. He is simply too full of himself. The story has all the negative points of ATG, plus his own narrative screw-ups. Still I would give this story a chance, everyone has different tastes I guess. But wait until MC's sister shows up, you're going to cry blood.

I don't understand how the hell I forget to rate this work of art. 10/10, not only is this the best RI fanfic I've ever read, it's also one of the best farming fanfics I've seen, maybe the best.

This is ..... surprisingly good. I like it, the only negative point I can think of is that MC is a bit clingy with Hayley. But overall I think the characters are well portrayed. So, I'm curious, MC has some kind of golden finger? Nothing ridiculously strong, but in that world souls have significant power. An otherworldly soul should have something to contribute. Klaus will be able to do magic? Will he be able to turn wolves into hybrids? Maybe he will be a bit stronger and faster? After all, Klaus is too far behind on the power scale in the future.

All the characters are MC but with a different name. Same attitude and thought process. Always ready to applaud and magnify the figure of the MC. And you tell me he disfigured someone and was not sued? He is not even the only case where there are no consequences for his actions. And sure, Gwen was being developed as a love interest beautifully. But she had to add more, and according to the author she was going to develop all those love interests. But in the end none of them were well developed. Instead of giving a good evolution to one character, you gave a bad evolution to all of them.

People, this story is stolen, and the real author does not charge for his work. The original name is Rhaegar the Ruthless [REWRITE] (SI) ...............

Perhaps my review was a bit rushed, after all there were not many chapters. But the points I criticized are not as bad as I may have made them out to be. Especially the part about Mai.

This feels very forced. Start off well, but you had to look for love interests so soon and so hastily. It all felt very unorganic. His maid contributes nothing when she speaks. I recommend you keep her quiet. Treat the filler characters for what they are. Don't try to give them value if you are going to discard them early.

Decent writing, good idea, decent protagonist and an excellent title. Personally I'm sick of ROBs, but the third wish is the most logical thing I've read. I just wanted to give you a little input. The adaptation of Mahoraga and MC can't be similar. Let's remember that Mahoraga could use the cut that cuts the world because he has those swords embedded to his body. In MC's case it should be similar to using a simple domain to disable Gojo's infinite in melee. If I have to point out something profoundly negative, and the hasty decision of the thanks for the chapters.

Bro, the story is just beginning. Mc is young, Fang Yuan lived a long time to become who he is. There is something called character development.

There are some minor flaws, I feel like you don't follow a thread, but when you come up with something you just use a totally rushed flashback to justify it. Which takes away a lot from the quality of the storytelling. Other than that, you don't do too badly. The story is somewhat innovative and readable. Mc is not a nasty person his development goes well. Although it would be nice if you explained his improvement a bit more. Thanks for the chapters. I sincerely hope you kill his fiancée. I didn't see anything wrong with him at first, but their relationship started to look very forced, very much so.