Webnovel Author: Rajat_Sharma_0663 - Fanfic Collection

Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.

It ok bro, i will try...well if you also don't mind me, i also have a little wish...can you try to write a novel about wizarding world.. not just about school but broad magical world of HP. Just set character to a person who recently graduated and exploring various communities of wizards. I am sure it will be a nice project for everyone...you can take some inspiration from fantastic beasts movies...

I like the character very much... although i am bit confused about that vivraniam or something as i didn't played hp game but overall novel is good.

Ok..the story till now (chapter 18) was good. Bit on the sad theme but not bad... Some points were similar to another hp novel...like one in which Harry's parents were alive and his grandparents died instead....Or he had sister named Rose or something, but in that novel Harry was way too arrogant....well it's just the beginning of 1st year... let's see where story will take us..

Well, there are too many imaginative fantasy in novel. Like hyperspace in the depth of ocean. If ocean depth goes beyond 60km then pressure will be so huge that water will turn into ice aka ICE 6.( Not possible on earth but other planets in space, yes if the planet is completely a water body with strong gravity.)

Well i like author's efforts to even pull this story out...read all the chapters and they were all good...like them very much.... people are constantly complaining that story doesn't follow MCU plot...but why does it need to follow MCU plot...there are literally many parallel worlds in MCU....you can stir the hotch poch as much as you want...mix anything you want....why limit yourself to the plots of movies.....just go for whatever plot....there is phoenix in MCU, in DXD and also in Harry Potter...but who said there can't be various types of phoenix when there are different types of dragons in Harry Potter world...over the top it's fanfic....some times ago i even consider to put Prince of Persia in HP because of sands of times lol...so just enjoy the good fan fic people and stop complaining about plot holes...

Overall it's really nice story... although the whole hero vibe is bit too sweet in MHA mc puts practicalality way above anything else. I don't know how nezu will when mc will Japan lol

Bro i don't know if you will read this comment but i will write it anyways.....i really like the 298, 299 and 300 chapters.... Do you know how i imagine the seen?....it's like two actors were singing a song while playing piano seperated by a mirror time.....its really beautiful.... thanks for the great story

I lost interest after seeing that mc went to ancient one just after four or five chapters.....why..... although i admit that magic can help in many things but atleast let her pass and when Strange become Master of Kamertaj then go to learn....it's boring

Overall it's good, I don't like the whole idea of going to the past.....if he just develops in his time it would be better... There are so many things in marvel to explore...you can even try different gods of other beliefs

Ok, what I like the most about this story is its details...and what I mean by details are the magical families details and author's creativity..