zakaria_zex - Profile

This is the lamest Mc you have created till now. He is like a slave with how weak he is, everyone can just order him aound. At least with canon time he can do something aside getting manhandled. When you write about a world of might makes right with a weak Mc its just suffering pointlessly and im not sadistic enough for this so im out.

Well... Its interesting but i will comeback after a few hundered Chapters if it doesnt get abondoned

Oh well..trash novel, trash author, trash ending... Even if its amusing trash, heh.

The chapters are a bit short no?

Why is he calling her sempai when they are in the same class??

Another dxd fic huh... I hope this one survives but looking at what the author said about the MC being ultimate class in 4 years while having 3 essence compared to issei the sopposed weakest sekiryuutei going to heavenly dragon class in one year... Yeah i dont think it will go anywhere, so bey😉😉

I thought why this fic was losing rank very fast, turns out the author messed up by nerfing the Mc for some drama😒😒 honestly this is the perfect setup for ntr so im running very far very fast 😱😱😱😱

Thx for the chapter

Not really but i was talking about the escalation because issei in canon has gone from the weakest reincarnated devil to super devil in the top 10 strongest beigns in a year and he was considered the weakest sekiryuutei by Michael and Azazel so i dont know how your going to top that with the Mc's current speed of growth without messing up the story🤨🤨🧐🧐

Sorry bro but what i hate the most is à weak Mc and yours is way too weak if even a low class devil has 5 times his stats and if he wants to fight the likes of evil dragons and gods then you have to make him train for a few thousend years or chapters?!!!!!!sorry im out 😉😉😉

The vice governor is called shemehazai not baraqiel since this is before Azazel retired 😅😅