Daoist_Lake

11h

Replied to BridgeToHeavens

Done. But i drop it half-way.

ch 0 3 'Cube'

Reborn In The Novel Extra

Anime & Comics · I_d0nt_kn0w

Daoist_Lake

1d

Replied to BridgeToHeavens

Novel Extra Nobody by Alfir. i don't know its suit with you taste, because its No-Harem Sect.

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Reborn In The Novel Extra

Anime & Comics · I_d0nt_kn0w

Daoist_Lake

2d

Replied to I_d0nt_kn0w

Thanks. i hope you not discourage to write again because this review. I already read many Novel Extra fanfic. And i know many of Novel Extra fanfic is drop, because author put too many Buff to their MC, and have Flawless Personality, so story arc in Canon Novel Extra become short because MC can easy solve Canon Novel Extra Conflict. And they don't know how to put Good Filler Chapter outside from Novel Extra Storyline. That why Perfect MC + Flawless MC always boring and not attract anything (except, you can write Canon Female Lead with interesting Personality, and have good compability with your MC)

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Reborn In The Novel Extra

Anime & Comics · I_d0nt_kn0w

Daoist_Lake

2d

Commented

I just want write review. This fanfic Will have Boring Phase. Your MC already Invincible (Immortality from Ajin), has knowledge about future plot, and good looking. If you put Calm Protagonist Template to your MC, this MC already Perfect Human. He don't need Character Development except training, because he already has Perfect Personality. Its Will boring story for me. Atleast you must put some weakness to MC, so he will know learning from mistake or something.

ch 0 3 'Cube'

Reborn In The Novel Extra

Anime & Comics · I_d0nt_kn0w

Daoist_Lake

2d

Commented

You must know many Korea LN is has : Good Start > Repeating Mid Arc > Bad Ending Conclusion.

Jean can only frown after seeing the world he is going to go. He didn't know whether to feel relieved or panicked. Jean can remember at least how the plot goes. He is not exactly a die hard fan who can remember all of the details as he drop the novel on its final arc because of how stretchy and the relationship Hajin have with Nayun is hurting his head. The world is kind of like Solo leveling but instead of fighting the ruler's or the monarch there will be a demon king that will descend. (A/N: I legit got a headache when reading about Hajin and Nayun relationship.)

Reborn In The Novel Extra

Anime & Comics · I_d0nt_kn0w

Daoist_Lake

5d

Commented

CorrupTobi

Naruto lived in a low income apartment and barely got enough money a month to survive on cheap food and junk. Not to mention that people still glared at him and treated him poorly even after i started hanging around and "kindly" convincing them of his good nature. Needless to say learning that someone, Hokage especially, was supposed to be taking care of him yet he lived in that condition left me less than happy, No I was VERY unhappy. My anger must have caused my power to slip out a little as the wood counter creaked and began to crack under my grip as I stared the old man down.-

Naruto-The secret sage

Anime & Comics · loskro

Daoist_Lake

6d

Commented

Thank You for the Chapter. I really love Ruby in this story😍

ch 99 Yozora Ruby 2

Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy

Anime & Comics · the_Goddess_Naru

Daoist_Lake

13d

Commented

Hahaha... It's true. Very common nowdays Fanfic and Light Novel. For convenience make storyline and plot armor

Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.

Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy

Anime & Comics · the_Goddess_Naru

Daoist_Lake

15d

Replied to the_Goddess_Naru

Thank You Very Much. I hope you always healthy and can have time to write this fanfic until end. If Ending haven't decided. I really hope you can make Single Route, and Harem Route. Thank you for your hard work. Good to read this fanfic/original story.

Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy

Anime & Comics · the_Goddess_Naru

Daoist_Lake

15d

Replied to the_Goddess_Naru

Yeah. My regret is i don't read it before you Reupload. its already 100 chapter😭

Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy

Anime & Comics · the_Goddess_Naru

Daoist_Lake

15d

Posted

You do a good job. Really, this is perfect story for me. Even you use Anime Character as template, i know its for reader can imagine how your Character expression they personality, its completely different from any Fanfic Story. Each Character have unique personality, and contrast each other. And what i love about this story, all Main Character or Side Character is not perfect, they complement each other. Even Story Development progress with good Narative each Chapter. I don't know how to explain it anymore. For me this really Good Story and Good Character. I can't have opinion for Writing Quality/Update/World Background, its not my speciality.

Haru & Naru ~ Love is a Comedy

Anime & Comics · the_Goddess_Naru

Daoist_Lake

22d

Replied to kingchad420

He don't want Fame.

ch 14 Chapter 14 : Laxus!!

Fairy Tail: I Am Not The Most Terrifying Wizard

Anime & Comics · Ani_Scout

Daoist_Lake

22d

Replied to Cozmic_Dragon

Thank You. i just hope, MC don't steal all Xiao Yan's Women

Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback

Anime & Comics · Johanssen10

Daoist_Lake

22d

Posted

bruh really? what different read original novel with Fanfic if you inside Protagonist Body? We here to see how your Original Character develop and have interaction Protagonist. Not Copy Cat with only slight different from Original.

The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld

Anime & Comics · Maya_Matengele

Daoist_Lake

22d

Commented

bruh really? what different read original novel with Fanfic if you inside Protagonist Body? We here to see how your Original Character develop and have interaction Protagonist. Not Copy Cat with only slight different with Original

"I see, it was my mistake I did not fully explain the circumstances of your rebirth, I thought that just saying the world and the story it would be enough, but I overlooked the background. Well, you will be reborn in the body of the protagonist of the story, Seol Jihu. As you will be reborn as said protagonist, you will have the weight of his responsibility, although it is your choice to live as you want, your actions have consequences, as dictated by the Law of Causality," said the deity.

The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld

Anime & Comics · Maya_Matengele

Daoist_Lake

23d

Commented

MC just become battle junky after get rid his trauma... hah... another one drop. Good at Opening, Bad at Ending

ch 41 Chapter 41 : New Golden Dragon King l

Human Of Rise In Against The Gods

Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin

Daoist_Lake

23d

Replied to Arima544

No Ship, please.

"Why? So you can harass me more? Besides, you just assigned me to watch over Yagami. If you need to reach me, do it through him," Ibuki retorts, her tone sharp.

COTE: Light Yagami in The Classroom of The Elite

Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda

Daoist_Lake

23d

Replied to Cozmic_Dragon

Bro, its Harem or not? i hate btth with Harem (or many women)

Btth: Tie Xiao Xun'er at the beginning and get ten times feedback

Anime & Comics · Johanssen10

Daoist_Lake

2mth

Posted

Writing : Readable Story : Good Character : Still Average Update : 1 Chapter / Week (Maybe) Background : Common on Fanfic. I don't want give too many suggestion : 1. Don't Write R18+ Chapter. It Ruin Story you build. 2. Don't give too many Harem. i don't know average person can satisfy everyone need (Just Be Rational) 3. Give Original MC (Fuutarou and other MC) their fated lover. this is just a suggestion. you can accept it or reject it. because my suggestion doesn't really conflict with the story you want to make. (Sorry my English really bad)