Endless_Suffering - Profile

What?

Great chapter, just a nitpick tho, can you stop stating every other chapter how he isn't a saint/devil or smth else? We already get it that he ain't no hero, no need to restate it every other chappy

Man, some of the people are entitled.

I guess people here don't know what quests are

The name's Iida (Uppercase i and lower case i) not Lida (Uppercase L and lowercase i)

Liked this better than the former development, honestly nice save! Great chapter👌

Don't really like this development. Like at all.

The info dumps is getting irritating. I mean, I can summarize what he said to "Darkseid ks super strong and DC isn't consistent". That's really my only problem with the whole story eh, you have great grammar, long chapters (even tho half of it is info dump), and some pretty good storyline. It's really just the info dumps that's really messing with it all.

Yeah some of the covos with all of them felt forced, but it's a really small part of the chapter so idrc. There is a problem that you have tho your POV changes are confusing, for example, there was a paragraph near the end where Odin was talking. But with no cuts/space it suddenly switched to Ichigo, so I got confused because I just read that Odin is thinking of introducing himself to Rossweisse. Only when I read the next 2 paragraph did it clear it up. Other than that tho, great chapter👌

NOICE chapter😏

Ahh oki oki got it👌

-if they were used. Forgot to add.

So the quirk erasing bullets aren't permanent anymore?

I'm at the first ten paragraphs and they said that the rewind is temporary? Ain't using the blood permanent? Or are they using Beru's copy of the quirk and not the blood?

Yasaka: "Ichigo stop being stupid! It doesn't suit you" Me: "Madam that's his whole schtick."

Well, with the way it happened, Thor sacrificing himself isn't as impactful as, but still a good chapter. Thanks.

She spectated his whole life yet didn't notice that he wasn't using any powers at all? Sounds dumb asf

Well that was easy

Got it got it