Well, reviews are supposed to be a helpful tool, it's another thing entirely what the reviewer makes of it. And I don't think his review was helpful in any way whatsoever. Firstly, if you can't expand on a point you made, just don't make the point in the first place. Secondly, you can't tell me the ego-card or his base review, where he calls this story 'unreadable' in the first sentence, is respectful to me. I'm human and write this story while working full-time, I won't be unbiased.
Real talk, I kinda wanted to make him an immortal tank... He got the base skills for it
[Vitality increased by 11!]
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BRUH
"Cole, I... wanted to apologize. At the inn, when you flinched away, I kinda took offence. Being a medical-nin has always been my dream and... yeah, it's a bit of a sore topic for me. Your eyes were a bit - uhh - surprising too. And... that's all actually."
Anime & Comics · josuamarques
Thank you for pointing that out <3
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Anime & Comics · josuamarques
Play with fire and you get burned...
... Not entirely
It isn't tho?
You won't find a party system or exp.
Thanks man. Yeah, those smut scenes are super whack and make little sense. The worst are the ones where the dude does no foreplay at all and the girl is flooding downstairs already.
Yeah, that would be a smart idea, I just don't know what name I'd give it.
A readable Naruto fanfic. (Naruto, The Gamer, OC)
Anime & Comics · josuamarques