Not_ayin

Not_ayin

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2019-11-23 Beigetreten Global
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Not_ayin
Not_ayin
1 months ago
Commented

what? I think I'm having a stroke since I'm going delulu

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
1 months ago
Commented

This is my 7th? 8th? re read? probably more than 10.

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
1 months ago
Commented

I am in awe

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
9 months ago
Commented

personally thought he was gonna go

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Not_ayin
Not_ayin
9 months ago
Commented

look a black hole

"In my dictionary, the term 'give up' never existed." Arkhan said lightly while smiling without worry. "Just relax and enjoy the show. Soon, I'll show you a true myth."

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
10 months ago
Replied to Not_ayin

*Cane

[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden]

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
10 months ago
Commented

Get the staff version.

[Quest Reward: Ninth Divine Key - Star of Eden]

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

FATE: The Man with Divine Keys

Anime & Comics · VALRRR

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
11 months ago
Posted

I like the story so far.. especially the MC's personality since to me he sounds like a chill dude, You're pacing is good to me since I understood all that happened, but one thing I suggest is to put the meaning of French words that are relevant to the plot in the bottom since most of us are too lazy to google it up, characters are also fleshed out and aren't just made in China copy paste cut out personalities. you're grammar is also good even though you said it's your third language. I also noticed that the fanfic has a romance tag, I recommend going monogamy and having just a single partner since harems aren't usually all that romantic. I also suggest Furina as a love interests, I would like to see more fanfics with her as one. overall I like it and give it a 5 star, please don't drop. [img=More pls]

Not_ayin
Not_ayin
Not_ayin
11 months ago
Commented

Good chap would like to see more author.