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The only thing wrong with this story is the translation got cancelled. This is easily one of the best stories I have read. It makes 99.9% of the stories on here look like hot trash.

I have no idea why this is rated so high. I found the character personalities shallow. The plot is outright lazy. The writer is obviously not an English speaker because the way the characters talk is atrocious, to say nothing about their reactions. Jason’s entire personality is that of a milksop. He kills people by the command of his 2 year old son but still stutters. His dialogue is unrealistic. I could go on. This story needs a total rewrite.

I really wanted to give this a higher rating. The cultivation aspect of this story is nonexistent. The protagonist has this really overpowered cultivation technique but has never been seen on screen using it, nor has she gained a single level from using it. Others have been seen to get multiple levels of experience from cultivating but our OP MC has not gained any. It’ very strange and makes me wonder why cultivation even exists if all the MC does is power level from killing mobs. Logically our protagonist could go power farm beast after beast and get level 100 in a few hours with her teachers help. Higher stats lead into better killing power = now you can go deeper in the forest and repeat the cycle.

This story is a bait and switch. MC starts out as a guy and turns into a girl within the first chapter. She makes lots of female friends down the line. It is never hinted that this is meant to be sexual. 100 chapters down the line she gets turned into a dude again and now has a harem. These are underage kids and it’s ick. I give it 2 stars for betraying the audience to make OP harem trash protagonist.