Honestly, at this point the story is stupid. If your viewpoint is so far beyond mortals then how can you enjoy mortal entertainment? He should of reincarnated with no memories to actually live and experience it. Also, using spells to program…. Ugh.
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Games · Pigeon by the Window
Nah, he just gave the gold digger what she wants… should of walked off with the money or donated it to the school or charity instead of letting her have a dime.
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Urban · Nalan Lingfeng
So… the author basically wants to go back and rewrite a story about going back and rewriting history… 😏
[Hi guys. After a hard consideration, I've decided to rewrite this novel as it was such a mess and I hope that this time, I could do better and at some point, this novel will be contacted. Nevertheless, I hope that I can write a better version and you can expect a different protagonist and some major adjustments]
Action · ADboy245
I’m glad these people are authors… cause if they were engineers with these math skills, people would definitely die. 🤣
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I would say it’s possible the town was founded there because of the bazaar, but didn’t they mention it was because of the health potion herb?
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Fantasy · LittleBastard879
So, all those relatives that donate an organ or bone marrow have possibly gotten a special reward? 😝
'Calm down, there is nothing between us. He is just helping me walk properly!' Anna tried to reassure herself as they slowly left the room.
Fantasy · LittleBastard879
Where did the 1000 SP come from?
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Fantasy · LittleBastard879
Honestly, I don’t understand the video much either. My understanding of the relationship is that she was basically a gold digger and he was a simp for her. So how does she portray that to earn her a positive reputation? As for Das, he got scammed, but at the same time any decent women would know his character and look him up right?
"I thought you would leave this collage. You really are shameless to come after all that happened. Even all our professors watched your shameful video. Do you know that?" His roommate, Fats, spoke immediately after seeing Das.
Urban · PeterPan
Unable = able?
It was a rather complicated intent to invoke in a shield and I certainly wouldn't have been unable to do so before, as the strain would have been too great.
Others · GodOfFreedom
Hope you are feeling better and I am so happy to get to read more of your writing!
I also had some health problems and turned my focus to a new story for a while, which caused me to have a bit of tunnel vision.
Others · GodOfFreedom
Since he died, that mission really was impossible 🤣
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Fantasy · slowpokeChaos
I would say it is more a sad thing to see the family split this way. Thinking of his past, having the loving family was a touching counterpoint to that dark life. Making the mom a capture target doesn’t bother me, and people will always have their preferences in how these things come about. I feel like it may have been better to kill him off protecting his family from assassins. Better for his image at least. Just going from the heartwarming character, to someone so neurotic and sleazy in a few chapters is a bummer. Maybe he will have a redemption of sorts later? I know the opinions can get overwhelming probably. I don’t envy authors with all of us back seat commenters. Anyway, I’ve enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing where you take us.
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Reincarnated in the Astral World
Fantasy · LamenThief