Webnovel Author: MellyK9 - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Also toji is more of the Mc than Zoro

I read up to chapter 50 and then skimmed the rest. The book, first of all, is exceptionally boring. Nothing seems to be happening story-wise or entertainment-wise. The character does not feel like Zoro he just has green hair and gets lost easily. Next, he is teaching haki to everyone instead of trying to learn cursed techniques, I kid you not a random girl walked in off the street and they offered to teach her haki fucking ridiculous. Also in the whole 155 written chapters he is still a child, it just feels boring reading the entire story from a child's perspective.

Honestly, I can't remember if I've given this book a review before, but I'm at Chapter 300, and it is a God damn masterpiece. I have no complaints whatsoever about this book. I am not a fan of MHA because I think the Mc is a bitch and it is annoying to watch but in this ff, the theme is slightly more dark and realistic which makes it enjoyable honestly the story keeps you captivated throughout. The only thing I didn't appreciate was nerfed by AFO, but it led to an insane power-up. The next Volume is shaping up to be one of the better ones if the Author plays his cards right.

fuck, even after 300 episodes Nick still hasn't gotten over his trauma. and the author killed every named character in the book. They are all dead.

So far I have read 100 chapters and I feel like the Mc has barely changed. He experiences bad stuff and he doesn't seem to grow much from it like he learns responsibly after that kid fell into a coma but other than that the character hasn't grown at all and he is like 17. To be fair though thw story has a completely unique power system, which is actually pretty good and well thought out. The story has tons of potential but the lame ass Mc brings the whole story down. (I'm at the part where he is thinking about suicide by Nurse). And the idea of specters is pretty cool as well, I don't think I'll give up on the novel yet, I'll give it another 50 chapters to hook me.

I didn't enjoy it much for a couple of reasons, but I can definitely understand if others like it. For me, the book isn't really serious enough. It spends too much time on jokes and tapping on the 4th wall. Another thing is the whole wolf best friend thing that just felt like it was out of nowhere. First, he is a human who is nihilistic and dislikes the world, and then suddenly, he is a wolf willing to befriend another wolf. And the ROB wannabe was also annoying for me, but again, the book is decent, just not my cup of tea.

Alright, I read chapter 15, and it became borderline unbearable. First of all, the character interactions are dry and seem to be rushed. Second, the MC is unbearable and a complete simp, from the second he met Hilary (his real crush that just happens to conveniently be in the same area as him from the thousands that just randomly spawn in. Plus, his friend is trapped in the game too, but this rich girl who has never interacted with him before is more important). He shows her his secret abilities and grants her free power-ups for no reason besides him being an imbecile. And he has absolutely no sense of danger. He is not at all worried about being stuck in a world forever and just immediately gets over it.