Just some criticism here but i think it needs to be said. You spend more of your time wrIting out the abilities than actually telling the story. As I read i cant help but forget what is actualy going on because there are so many abilities that i think im going to need to know. Its really offputting to a reader. Granted I still love the actual story and thats why i wanted to say this. Keep at it!
ch 67 Prelude to the Second Showdown
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Its not bad. There are a lot of things I was hoping to see in this story and they just flat out didnt happen. First off, best girl Scathac kinda got sidelined, and disappears for 5-6 chapters never to be heard of or even thought of. For a love interest i think its kind of a bad way to involve her. Second, there really isnt a plot to the story at all. Maybe later on but as of chapter 29, I havent found anysort of story or journey the MC goes on. Hes just messing around and it gets insanely frustrating seeing the MC become a literal god in 15 chapters and then do nothing. He has been to 3 different worlds already and barely did anything in them except again mess around. If there was an actual story here and if the MC didnt mess around the whole time i would continue reading but i dont think i can take it anymore.