NyxOuroboros

9h

Posted

Well... not for sissies. Pure lemon, deception, ntr, etc. . .

Dark Mage's Ascension

Fantasy · Inkyug

NyxOuroboros

8d

Replied to NyxOuroboros

I don't speak much English, so sorry for the mistakes.

ch 17 Ideals & Reality (II)

Epic of Leviathan [REBOOT]

Anime & Comics · InGlorious

NyxOuroboros

8d

Commented

In fact there may be a small error; force and logic are respected, even if something happens it is possible that the heroes "try" to make him walk for good and make him be a hero in the future; While also being a minor he cannot go to jail, equally being a minor he can testify to the criminal organization and finally be put back up for adoption.

ch 17 Ideals & Reality (II)

Epic of Leviathan [REBOOT]

Anime & Comics · InGlorious

NyxOuroboros

10d

Replied to NewComer714

In this case I'm going to retire, it was a good introduction to history.

ch 49 Notice

Godfather System

Movies · NewComer714

NyxOuroboros

10d

Replied to AKASHIIIi

Yes the vast majority.

ch 49 Notice

Godfather System

Movies · NewComer714

NyxOuroboros

10d

Commented

If I'm honest, for that to happen you must take into account the readers' tastes. I'm not saying that you write directly taking an example from what we discussed, just small details that can make the story something good to read. And as I said before, many here see history as a reality with different realities together, in a time of the 20th century, so having a "harem" upsets the vast majority, including me. I only ask that there be no harem or lovers, being loyal to his future wife.

ch 49 Notice

Godfather System

Movies · NewComer714

NyxOuroboros

11d

Replied to NewComer714

Hahaha

ch 48 Insane and Madman

Godfather System

Movies · NewComer714

NyxOuroboros

11d

Replied to Ozerist

Yep

ch 48 Insane and Madman

Godfather System

Movies · NewComer714

NyxOuroboros

11d

Posted

It's a fantastic story, but unfortunately I dislike it. I'm not a big fan of mood changes, it entertained me since I thought he would be a villain who destroyed everything, but seeing the mood changes in each chapter made me embarrassed. In any case good luck.

Shigaraki in Marvel

Movies · RewindTime

NyxOuroboros

11d

Commented

ch 30 Favour for a friend.

Shigaraki in Marvel

Movies · RewindTime

NyxOuroboros

11d

Posted

This man is sick, starting with a 5-year-old Yamato. Up ahead there is shit farming. . .

One Piece: the son of Kaido

Anime & Comics · truepowerscaler1

NyxOuroboros

13d

Commented

ch 13 Perilous Recruitment? (III)

Epic of Leviathan [REBOOT]

Anime & Comics · InGlorious

NyxOuroboros

14d

Posted

NTR (/_;)/~~ . . .

Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem

Fantasy · starry8sword

NyxOuroboros

15d

Posted

Perfection. No multiverse shit, powers from other universes or things like harem. . .

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

NyxOuroboros

15d

Commented

Information for the author (^.^)... 1)- Tsaindorcus Vaision was formed to attack undead, so Thoth is the counter. 2)- There are no potions that regenerate mana, in fact the only way to regenerate it faster was by meditating. 3)- Every healing potion is a poison for the undead. 10/10 the chapter... 3 stone (^o^)

ch 44 Be (not) afraid.

I became an NPC in The Great Tomb of Nazarick

Anime & Comics · MarAuthor

NyxOuroboros

16d

Commented

I would love for him to neither be a hero nor a villain, to only do things for his own interest, even if it is killing the innocent, there is already a lot of shit about heroes on the platform: v. Great chapter.

ch 11 Perilous Recruitment? (I)

Epic of Leviathan [REBOOT]

Anime & Comics · InGlorious

NyxOuroboros

16d

Posted

This is annoying. Being able to exchange coins for power is stupid; Another thing is the amount of things he does at only 6 years old. 6 years old! Even children, not even Madara himself was capable of doing something with chakra at 6 years old. Finally, it is time, a stupid need to want to extend the plot when no one takes a 6-year-old child seriously, it is a fantasy world but it is not a world of stupid people. In other words, Madara's idea was good, the first chapters too, but instead of making a time jump he did stupid things to give it a plot.