Why just not freeze the whole bird instead of doing nonsense?
Rearing its head back and slowly significantly Kat used this chance to slam both feet down onto the frozen wing. Cracks ran along the ice as they spiderwebbed out from the impact. As the Barbarashi trudged forward with the last remains of its momentum the ice fell from its wing.
Fantasy · Vongrak
EQ negative 100
She didn't think Albert ever loved her. Was he working as her assistant to pursue her? Who spread the rumor? She was with Albert for two years and never thought he liked her.
Sci-fi · AnnaShannel_Lin
Go to Fiverr a hire a cheapest English spell checker FFS. It's just horrible. Sentences are a complete mess which too often are hard to figure out. Commas do not exist for author, at least in correct places, and that's besides much more serious problems.
D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad
Fantasy · Vongrak