shabnam_jeddikar

shabnam_jeddikar

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A girl who's biggest joy is to write!

2020-11-12 Beigetreten Global
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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Replied to McKnight5206

Hello dear friend, my name is Shabnam and I am the author of the book Broken Demon. At first, I wanted to thank you for the excellent point you made, I trusted my editing program, and well ... it turned out that it doesn't work that well! I agree that my grammar needs to be improved and I think it's not a surprise because English isn't my first language and this book is my first experience in writing an English book. I am working on improving the grammar and errors of my book and I hope to be able to perfect it soon! Based on your effective review I edited all the parts of my book again, and I feel that it has improved a bit. And it would be nice to have an observer reader like you with us, stay with the journey, I'm sure it will surprise you!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

Another great work from this talented Author! The synopsis is really engaging and I loved the mysterious side of it, the plot is great and it's really enjoyable to read!I totally recommend it! keep up with the good work Author!🖒

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

That's it!I loved it already! This book has a wonderful attraction that you can't stop yourself, and you find yourself with burning eyes,still reading it! Great introduction, great plot and Great job Author, keep it up!

shabnam_jeddikar
shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

First of all! I've read ton's of supernatural books and I can recognize a good book of this genre and this is one of them! I loved it's synopsis because it's really exciting ! This is not a cliché story for sure and it's character introduction is also Great! I highly recommend this! Great job Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

Wow!This book is one of those that make you excited! The synopsis is very well written and catchy! I love the Author's sense of humour and I always loved a funny love story! Overall i recommend it to everyone!nice job Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

This story really got my attention! It has a really nice flow and interesting character development, everyone should give this book a chance!I can't wait for the next chapter ,good job Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

I love it!It has a really catchy and interesting synopsis! It's really easy and enjoyable to read and you won't be disappointed in reading this marvellous book! I can't wait for the next chapter and good work Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

Wow!the synopsis is really catchy and interesting! I always loved mysterious and challenging love storys and this is a good one! It's really easy and enjoyable to read and you won't be disappointed in reading this marvellous book! Keep the good work Author!

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shabnam_jeddikar
3 years ago
Posted

I love this book!It's really catchy and interesting! The character's are beautifuly developed and it's really easy and enjoyable to read! You should really give this marvellous book a chance! I'm waiting for more chapter's 💙💙