Abzeichen 16
Moments 2670
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 303 Chapter 303: Five Shots and Still Alive
Invisible Security Guard
Urban · Peach Has Sold Out
Did her own sister and grandmother send the wolf?
ch 22 The answer to my eyes
The Vampire Prince's Blindfolded Bride
Fantasy · Light_ray
Wait! Is The King Magnus' father or is he only the king of the vampires?
ch 18 Lower your eyes
The Vampire Prince's Blindfolded Bride
Fantasy · Light_ray
Oooooooh! Are we going to delve into the political intrigue now?
ch 13 Ripping his heart
The Vampire Prince's Blindfolded Bride
Fantasy · Light_ray
Did he hand her the silver cup she was drinking out of? Aren't vampires severely allergic to silver? I'm guessing not in this book, huh?
ch 0 3 Magnus Lukeson, the Vampire Prince
The Vampire Prince's Blindfolded Bride
Fantasy · Light_ray
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 5 LET'S MAKE A TOAST FOR GREAT SURPRISES
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "She purposely left a few buttons undone, showing off her cleavage and her necklace with a heart-shaped pendant, a gift from her mother."
It was already close to lunchtime and the Queen was wearing a loose red satin blouse, she purposely left a few buttons undone showing her cleavage and showing off her necklace with a small heart-shaped diamond pendant. Gift from your mother.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "...Bloody Spring was approaching. There was only a few days until it started."
A few days passed and the Bloody Spring was getting closer, there were only a few days left for it to start.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Suggestion: "...Spring was approaching, ..."
A few days passed and the Bloody Spring was getting closer, there were only a few days left for it to start.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "...dissipate, others were dissatisfied with her posture." Suggestion: I'm not sure that "posture" is the right word. Maybe "disposition"?
Wang Zheng left her armchair towards the door, and some were already reassured that the pheromone would soon dissipate, but others were dissatisfied with your majesty's posture.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
"...left her armchair to move towards the door, and when some felt already assured..."
Wang Zheng left her armchair towards the door, and some were already reassured that the pheromone would soon dissipate, but others were dissatisfied with your majesty's posture.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Suggestion: "Fine. Then I'll retire for the evening."
Wang Zheng left her armchair towards the door, and some were already reassured that the pheromone would soon dissipate, but others were dissatisfied with your majesty's posture.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Suggestion: "Yes, we've seen the confirmed Bloody Spring guest list, and the two..."
"Yes, we've seen the Bloody Spring confirmed list and the two alphas look pretty good..."
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: Use a period instead of that comma to separate out the two sentences.
It was silly to say that the country would go into decline, it would take years for that to happen, it would take a lot of effort for that kingdom to go into decay.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "Hurriedly, several men..."
Hurriedly several men stood up at the sight of Wang Zheng, and within moments, they already felt the strong scent of pineapple enter their nostrils and permeate the entire room. Extremely uncomfortable.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "...the second of her name..."
"Please rise and greet your royal majesty, the second of your name, Wang Zheng."
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Suggestion: "She sighed, resigned."
She sighed bored. "Let's go then."
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: " The long black hair contrasted with her skin tone, giving a more serious..."
The long, black hair contracted giving a more serious and elegant aura to the young woman. Every night before going to sleep, she made a habit of writing in her diary while drinking tea. She fingered the blank pages as she thought about what should be written, until she heard a faint knock on her door.
The Princess Fall In Love With the Omega Queen
Fantasy · moonsside
Correction: "Several weeks."
"A couple of weeks. Approximately two months." He answered and walked out the door.
I Am An Illegitimate Child With A Legitimate Reason For Revenge
Urban · Author_fredah