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no story no quality no development no normal character shitty writing no story no quality no development no normal character shitty writing

average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers average writing and alot of cliffhangers

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copy summary: Mc is dumb af and treats new life like its fake or a game. He reveals isntantly to mcgonagall that he knows about hogwarts and magic and who she is. With no excuse or explanation and author doesnt even follow up on it. Goes to Diagon alley and he like outloud i always wanted to visit. Its stupid. Btw he a orphan in muggle world that has no connection to magic so no excuse how he know. Its poorly pit together sadly plus a system. If here for a decent ff then leave because this aint it. Sorry author but its true.

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Well smart dementors is too wired ==============================================================================================================

lot of lazy writing, no plot sequence, naming=>bruuu ==============================================================================================================