Why 😅
My parents were both dead. My father was a knight in Winterfell serving Lord Stark and died in service while saving his life. My mother was a servant in the castle serving the Lord's family, but she passed away six months ago from a fever. And most importantly, my name is Aermir Drasil.
TV · KuroWashi1903
Finally, a motive for the character. I’d like to say as an edit is to flesh out more about his fear of changing the future. Not full on angst but at least an understanding at that point. This clears up where the character wants to go now.
As he caught the train he tried to organize his thoughts better, for what he was planning on doing in the future now. What his goals were. He wanted to be stronger, to protect himself and the people that really mattered to him. He wanted to be able to have a safe and stable future.
Anime & Comics · EpicBean
I have a problem with MC. What’s his motivation to involve himself with the plot? There’s none other than just doing it and that’s gonna make this story harder to write in the future. He doesn’t want to be a hero, he’s not worried about his safety, he doesn’t want power, he doesn’t even care about girls. So why is he going through all of this?
ch 0 5 Training [updated]
Anime & Comics · EpicBean
I don’t like this jump. Snape would never ask another student to read that mail. Not in the sense of privacy, but more caution because something happened that caused such a powerful reaction, which could be a curse too.
ch 100 Wrath and reveal
Book&Literature · loskro
This is the weirdest story that I started and it’s now one of my favorites. I love it, with all its weirdness, it works so well, easy to read and to follow along. The MC is so well written, he meshes with the well chosen group of servants and cast.
Fate/Fisted
Anime & Comics · Bleap