i personally enjoy it a lot, just continue bro thanks for the update.
Guys, I need your honest review about my story that I've been writing and you are reading. Lately, I've been getting the feeling that maybe it's not connecting with you and you are not enjoying it. I want to know if that's the case. Are there specific aspects you don't enjoy? Is there something you think could be improved? Should I consider discontinuing it altogether?
Anime & Comics · God_RimuruTempest
with OP mc u need a lot goals to achive, make some kind list of his objective like for example in order to protect his family he need to be strong, but he can't never be there for them, so he make his own force that can cover him up, etc
Alright.... I need some help , I got somewhat carried away in my writing and made the MC a tad bit too strong...
Anime & Comics · Grigo
maybe u can also add otsutsuki arc like in fanfic Naruto: since ancient time
(A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?]
Anime & Comics · eternal_angel12
i have suggestion, maybe try yo build his secret force like wandenreich in bleach or akatsuki/kara. Well because he is to strong it will easily became boring, so for most part of his plan just order his subordinate and only for interesting thing he act himself like for example zero tail arc, akatsuki, the box of bliss, moryo, otsutsuki, kara.
(A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?]
Anime & Comics · eternal_angel12
can he at least use fuinjutsu
ch 0 7 Chakra Affinity Dilemma
Anime & Comics · bhautik_trambadia
small arc will be nice
Avatar (blue monkey people)
Video Games · Some_creative_name
With his high level comprehension he can combine all
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Anime & Comics · Sanchit_8078
just suggestion, sword dao is his primary dao, maybe add secondary like alchemist dao or something so he can make his force as foundation
The concept of his system was quite simple, the system had already chosen the sword dao for him and he had to keep swinging the sword to unlock further realms in Sword dao.
Anime & Comics · DaoistOeHtln
really, u now potion is important especially for learning alchemist that can help almost all his plan
History of Magic was by far the most boring subject, Herbology, he hadn't tried yet, but he doubted he would like, and Potions… well, Ethan wouldn't say he disliked it, but it, again, sounded a bit like a bother to learn recipes and such.
Book&Literature · SlyOW
maybe you can focus on magic more, i mean in manhwa jinwo has infinite mana from his black heart. Maybe some sort assassin-magician
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Anime & Comics · Shadowstorm30
TFTC, more
ch 14 14. The Raid Part-I
Anime & Comics · ChaosVoid_24
1 if he really became alchemist then can u explore more about alchemist and of course he need a lot material and money so maybe also explore about world and business
Slytherin: Manipulative harry, Alchemist harry, Wrong boy who lived, Martial magic, Genuinely good Dumbledore.
Anime & Comics · Vegeta_Kakarot
can you do like common folk/some interesting character pov about mc and his kingdom/organization
What's up, everyone? I'm back. I decided to continue here. If there are things you would like to see, please comment.
Anime & Comics · Vincent_0580
i love world buildingg, do more often please thank for the chapter
(For those interested in the kingdom-building aspect, I hope you enjoy it, and for those who aren't, feel free to skip until the next part after the — — — It wasn't something I explored too much originally, but I really enjoyed writing this chapter so there probably will be more like it here and there. Let me know what you think.
I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)
Anime & Comics · BonVoyage