Been really enjoying the novel. Keep up the good work [img=recommend]
ch 212 Terrifying Jordan!
Urban · I Have Something To Say
appreciate the input, yeah was thinking of touching on the academy period with flashbacks now and then, also planned on having some supporting nobility down the road. Probably touch on it a bit in volume three, finished writing volume two yesterday just have to go back and edit the drafts.
ch 18 Chapter One: Graduation
Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
I was hoping people would like the accents <3
"What if I be tellin ya when ye go ta sleep tonight ye could wake up wit a whole new life" the old man said in all seriousness, before the young man's eyes the old fellow shifted, his back straightened his hair blackened and the bright glow from his eyes became more intense.
Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
thanks I must have missed that in editing :D
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Fantasy · Yamashita_Kaito
Really enjoyed reading this will have to come back when you have more chapters available :D
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Fantasy · theforce1579
theres a couple spots here where the word conscience is used, i think the word you meant to use was consciousness. could be wrong though
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Fantasy · theforce1579
right in the feels :D
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Fantasy · theforce1579
Really feel bad for Iris, she was a good person but her situation destroyed her.
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Fantasy · theforce1579
hopefully that unfit abusive parent got what he deserved
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Fantasy · theforce1579
nice teacher, a lot of them will just ignore a situation like that considering it to much of a hassle.
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Fantasy · theforce1579
absolutely beautiful description
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Fantasy · theforce1579
really like persephone, despite being scared she doesn't let her captors know in such a bad situation.
ch 0 9 Cold Blue eyes
Urban · tanu_sam
:D this was a really good chapter, couldn't stop reading it
ch 0 6 "What's your name?"
Urban · tanu_sam
did a really good job on the villains :D
ch 0 4 Villain or a misunderstood Hero?
Urban · tanu_sam
not sure if it was intentional or not but this line is repeated twice.
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Urban · tanu_sam
really like the explanation at the end not really familiar with mafia terms.
ch 0 2 Ambush in the church
Urban · tanu_sam
thanks for the explanation was going to google it lol
[Mia bambolina is a endearment used for daughter in Italian.]
Urban · tanu_sam
Can't wait to read more, hope you're enjoying the holiday season!
ch 239 Victoria's Scandal!
The Abandoned Husband Dominates
Urban · I Have Something To Say