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RomanceFanatic028
female LV 4Hi, i am Riya. i love reading and writing books and i also like watching movies (mostly horror), but most importantly i love to make new friends, so would you like to be my friend?
2021-07-30 Beigetreten GlobalAbzeichen 6
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Anna. The writing is from her pov so she is the main character.
ch 0 4 Unexpected Meeting (1)
Red Blood Century
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
I am sorry for nitpicking but H should be capital.
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Special shoutout to @InkDreamer Check out their book called “Way back to Neverland”
ch 0 6 Am i a healer?
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Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
So far I read till chapter 5 because the chapter were so short. I didn’t realised I was there. Okay, so the characters were interesting. I loved the way you wrote dialogue. It seemed relatable. Everything was good but I noticed in some places you used comma instead of fullstop. Reread the chap and edit it out. Overall nice read. All the best author.
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How many words you write in a chapter? I am curious.
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But what did he call her? I found nothing cringe.
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That was very short chapter. I wonder what interview they were talking about? Anyway, great start. [img=recommend]
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Special shoutout to @ProPug Check out their book called “Sinner's Blood”
ch 72 Who is dahlia? (2)
Red Blood Century
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
Special Shoutout to @shokon Check out their book called “parelel world travel”
ch 71 Who is Dahlia? (1)
Red Blood Century
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
Thanks for the review. I would love to know your ideas.
Can you point out where you found grammatical error.
ch 0 2 Shaman Of The West Village
Red Blood Century
Fantasy · RomanceFanatic028
Didn’t expected the start to be so spicy. I didn’t know what to even comment. Lol. Anyway, I don’t usually read smut so let’s move to the plot. There are only 2 chapters so far. So can’t judge. But your writing style is amazing. Good luck. I know it will get popular in future for sure. [img=recommend]
When The Moon Tilts West
Teen · Rock_writer