I don't feel any emotions in this chapter apart from frustration, seriously and he's supposed to be smart but a crazy guy and he's already defeated he has it in the palm of his hand.
ch 81 Chapter 78: Raising The Stakes
Video Games · Khay_Cee_Padua
Why don't you make machines or drones that are used for surveillance and spread them out? The guy can literally make a nearly indestructible supership and he can't just make simple surveillance technology or satellites to look for whoever he wants?
ch 71 Chapter 69: They Are Making Their Move
Video Games · Khay_Cee_Padua
What you said in point 2 is very noticeable, but he also did not actively do anything to change it, all the people who knew him could read him like an open book, and that is very bad considering that he is a politician even if he does not want to. The cliché part, the truth is that it doesn't bother me, but it should be taken into account that you use the cliches of the anime, if you commonly use the ones from web novels or other similar ones it would be fine, the ones from the anime don't fit either because of the context or because the feeling it gives when you read it. Point 4, I am in conflict with this point, on the one hand he shows concern for the girls but on the other, he should not show so much concern, he is apathetic and nihilistic but it seems that he had an attack of rage when he found out what they did. pass to the girls. I'm not saying he should be totally apathetic, but showing so much agitation over different situations doesn't fit the type of character you want to portray. I will continue reading, but I hope the MC improves, even if he is still stupid but at least wiser and with greater composure.
Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)
Others · Daoist_KittyKat