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2022-08-29 Beigetreten Nigeria
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ch 0 1 Episode 1: My Lunchtime/My Munchtime
Fantasy · FantasyLord
Talk about intense
Oh no 😲
The strong emotions I'm feeling right now make me ignore the consequences of my actions. I'm ready to barge in, but suddenly someone knocks me unconscious from behind.
Realistic · Air_Ace
Yet another done right... Luv the pace
ch 12 Living Goods?
Realistic · Air_Ace
Greg, maintaining his theatrical flair, dramatically clutched his chest. "Oh, the betrayal! My heart can't take it! But, I forgive you. Brother Blaze, you're a lucky one to have such a forgiving friend like me."
Realistic · Air_Ace
Been a while though
"Way to go Rafiki?" Kilr hissed. "Now you'll tell me to go find the truth in my reflection!"
Fantasy · FantasyLord
"Enough! Just speak to the point and tell me why you guys are here in Sparks Country?"
Realistic · Air_Ace
Stories like this always hit the spot ...
The neighborhood heard the commotion but it was already too late. When the police came Vince's mother was already dead. Vince survives because he is protected by his mother. The police give the custody of Vince to the Ember Orphanage. Mother Kelly asked me to look out for Vince. Ever since then Vince never speaks again. That was the story I heard from them."
Realistic · Air_Ace
So every time Vince's father is drunk. He's gonna beat up anyone who he thinks is making noise inside their house. But not until he comes home where Vince is practicing singing along with the help of his mother because Vince's teacher asked him to perform in their school event. Vince's father goes mad after hearing his wife and Vince's voice singing. He beat Vince and his wife, but he beat his wife so much to the point that Vince's mother died. She was beaten to death.
Realistic · Air_Ace
"Hey! Stop with the bullshit storytelling. Just tell me what exactly happened."
Realistic · Air_Ace
Seriously! This Greg kid annoys me. He has that serious face while telling and demonstrating that story. He even tries mimicking the fight scenes.
Realistic · Air_Ace
Just my honest opinion here but I think you should put their ages in bracket rather than have them say it...
"In this little town, my brother Vince, aged 10, and I, Greg, aged 12, faced the world hand in hand. Every day, armed with determination and a makeshift cart, we scoured the streets for recyclables to sell."
Realistic · Air_Ace
After some time, we settle down at the sala set. Looking at their fresh faces now. The younger kid has a cute face while the taller kid has a pretty handsome face. Oh, but I have a charismatic handsome face. So my handsomeness is on a different level from theirs.
Realistic · Air_Ace
As I came back to my senses I saw them staring at me in horror. As if I'm a devil in disguise.
Realistic · Air_Ace
Like so
Once the two men are about to grab or subdue me. I quickly kicked the stomach of the one near my left side while delivering an uppercut to the one on my right side.
Realistic · Air_Ace
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ch 0 1 Episode 1: My Lunchtime/My Munchtime
My Zombie System In The Apocalypse World
Fantasy · FantasyLord