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_Queen_A
female LV 12The journey of a thousand miles begins with a step, that's what they say. Well, guess what... I'm taking steps...✌️ See you at the end of the road🤷🏼😁
2021-10-02 Beigetreten NigeriaAbzeichen 15
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I'm not upset. I like someone who can note a flaw and do it as nicely as you're doing.It helps me improve on my writing😊 And yes, do check in my other novels. But do give me a heads up on the one you will choose to read next. Because I can tell you about one particular novel of mine with extreme flaws. Even I sometimes wonder how I ever wrote that particular novel 😂😂😂
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
Noted
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
Alright you got me🙃
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DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
Thank you!I'll definitely pick a month for editing. There are lots of errors in this one, apart from the wrong names, there are also improper use of punctuations that I do need to correct.I'll work on it😊
"Please, Mr King, just this once, just this one time, forgive me, don't make me fish food. Please I beg you.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
It is, eavesdropping. My bad. Thanks again 😂
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Urban · _Queen_A
Even with all the flaws. Thank you!
"Please, Mr King, just this once, just this one time, forgive me, don't make me fish food. Please I beg you.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
Oh God, open the eyes of this writer!😭Sorry my dear reader!
"What's wrong? David King asks as he was expecting a swooping hug from his son.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
🤣 How are you catching these mistakes!Again, thank you for nicely picking them out.I think I'll have to dedicate an entire month to edit the entire novel😂 It has so many flaws.But I'll correct this one right away.
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Urban · _Queen_A
And also, pls don't feel wronged when u find out ur comment is deleted. As long as I edit a paragraph, the comments under it are automatically deleted by the site.Thank you for the corrections, I always welcome them.🙏😊
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Urban · _Queen_A
😂Sorry, I shouldn't be laughing but I can sincerely feel your frustration from your words.I'm truly sorry for the mistake. I was writing two different novels at the time I wrote this one. Vanessa was from the other novel.Forgive my lack of proper proofreading.
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Urban · _Queen_A
Oh, my bad!Thanks for noticing. I'll change it now. 😊
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DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
Thank you 😊
ch 200 200. DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME...
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Chapter One_Kiss Me
One Night Stand With The Heiress In Disguise
Urban · EllenHasyChiny
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Chapter One_Kiss Me
One Night Stand With The Heiress In Disguise
Urban · EllenHasyChiny
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Rebirth
REBIRTH AND REVENGE
Fantasy · g_d
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Rebirth
REBIRTH AND REVENGE
Fantasy · g_d
I support you on this!🤜
ch 103 103. See you in another world.
Cloaked in an Enigma
Fantasy · _Queen_A
On
" But I want to tell you, I think I'll be right" he still nods a no, trying not to smile like a lovestruck bunny.
DEVIOUS YOU, NAIVE ME
Urban · _Queen_A