Firelorn_P_King

Firelorn_P_King

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Just an introverted writer🖤

2021-10-16 Beigetreten Nigeria
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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

Assassin's, brokers, wisps and the best part, magic. The story encompasses a lot of things in fantasy. The plot is straight forward and the grammar is great, very understandable. If I was to complain I would say the first few were a bit slow but it gets better real quick. As a story with a lot to say about the main character and the adventure they go through, it's an interesting read.

Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Replied to Jo_J

Thanks and Happy New year to you too

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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

Fascinating, the experience these characters go through in the name of discovery of that one emotion, love. I like the struggle between love and lust that the characters went through, it made it interesting. Well written with good grammar as well. In a way, it feels like an intriguing romance story where the characters journey through their lives to find true love. It's a good read.

Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Commented

Fascinating...

'Love' became a mere word in her terminology. Just a mere neurobiological process that involves twelve areas of the brain, which activates to release euphoric neurotransmitters like dopamine, oxytocin, adrenaline and vasopressin. At the same time, sophisticated cognitive functions related to the creation of mental representations, metaphors and body image change; in short, it was all trickeries of the mind.

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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

The story is well thought out and the grammar is clean, neat and well written. I also enjoyed the plot of the story as well, very smooth and understandable. I know it starts a bit grey due to the MC's past but reading through the thoughts of the mc, Bryan, it's a bit funny too. Just from reading a few chapters I was able to visualize what was happening like a movie. I enjoyed the immersive nature of the story. And the situations made sense, heck, I would say they were kind of realistic. A very good story with a lot of potential overall.

Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Commented

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Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Commented

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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

I've taken a good while of my time to read this novel, and let me just say... This is not a story, it's a masterpiece, it's a movie, and a good one at that. Need I say more.

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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

I've got to say, for a fantasy novel it's got a lot of action, adventure and surprisingly drama. I read the first chapter, before you know it, I was on the fourth one. It's really driven and energetic especially in the dialogues of the main character. It was just so much to read in one sitting but not so much to overwhelm you. All in all, I enjoyed it.

Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_King
1 years ago
Posted

It's an acquired taste. The beginning was a bit weird and surprising, but it was definitely intriguing. From the 'culture' writing, you can see that the author is definitely a man of culture. Thus, it's definitely an exciting read for my fellow men of culture out there. The grammar is quite alright as well as the intricate descriptions of the characters. I also like how unique the plot of the story is, especially with its utilization of the 'enhancers' in such a power driven world background. It's an exciting read indeed, especially after the first few chapters. That's when the 'climax' takes effect.

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