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Eu também adoro como ele tenta balancear o chackra Yang e Ying dentro dele

Não livre pra baixa nota nas avaliações da história, continue escrevendo, mal posso esperar pra ver um Uchiha dominando a energia natural e atingindo o modo sábio.

Na verdade o templo que Sunny faz uma oferenda não e do Deus das Sombras, ele e apenas o único deus a responder Sunny.

When we see the character train past the raisin to achieve his strength, it seems more real instead of something that came simply with three lines from the author "He trained this and mastered it

The author should make an effort to write the protagonist's actions instead of simply reporting them, for example I would like to have seen all the training he did to have the speed of a Chunin

It's always great to wake up and have coffee reading a new chapter.

Prevent an event like the Kyuubi Attack while only being 5 years old? Will he become an S-Rank Ninja in this period? Too much overpower

The Amazon rainforest is located in South America and not North America.

Good chapter

In FanFiction or Webnovel?

Can anyone recommend good Dragon Ball fanfics like this?

Anos de experiência em Haki em uma luta ? Overpowered protagonista? Bye

Seria bom por que assim ele poderia ter uma Kekke Genkai, que só despertou depois de ele reincarnar e ter mais Energia Espiritual e Chackras Yin, e bem todos sabemos como Orochimaru brincou com Kekke Genkai.

I forget, more Transfiguration and the subject that the protagonist has more talent, right?

C