I know that bro I'm Indian
But there was a fourth passenger who seemed strangely detached from the chaos around him. Asher Tennyson sat by the window, his dark eyes fixed on the passing forest. Unlike his cousins, there was something distinctly mature about his demeanor that seemed out of place for a ten-year-old boy. His Asian features and thoughtful expression set him apart from the typical American children around him.
In Ben 10 With My Sign-In System
Anime & Comics · AshenMoons
bro stop using the 30 year old comment again and again, it feels frustrating to read
Siddanth worked harder than everyone. He was the first to arrive, the last to leave. He ran extra laps. He did extra shadow-batting. He was a 30-year-old man on a mission, fueled by a 20-year-old regret.
Cricket: Template system
Prominente · LuFFy_158
Although she could now control the Nine-Tails' power and unleash strength comparable to Hashirama's, she didn't believe a boy in his teens could reach her level of mastery. Moreover, the Nine-Tails itself is an external force and is inherently inferior to power gained through diligent training.
I Unlocked My Genetic Lock in the Naruto World
Anime & Comics · coolperry
Tai Lung's voice turned sharp, full of disdain. "No. You will be the one to suffer, you second place."
Avatar TLAB: Tai Lung
Anime & Comics · Milk_Is_My_Drug
For he was Tai Lung, The Snow Leopard and Shifu's most destructive student.
Avatar TLAB: Tai Lung
Anime & Comics · Milk_Is_My_Drug
bro it feels like you're rushing through the chapter by shortening the conversation. In your previous chapters you used full sentences in the conversations which was better for the reader coz it made the dialogues appear natural. Hope you will go back to writing the way you used to.
He nodded, pulling her close. The bench creaked, leaves whispering overhead. "Miss you already." Emotion deepened: love's ache, fame's cost. She kissed him softly. "Score big."
King Of Cricket
Prominente · Kynstra
The story is looking really good so far. The chapters are a good length, and the grammar is excellent. I hope you won’t abandon the fic and will keep the updates regular.
it's alright man the new chapters are really good. And the way you portrayed the final day of lords test was phenomenal. I was able to picture everything in my mind
He nodded, pulling her close. The bench creaked, leaves whispering overhead. "Miss you already." Emotion deepened: love's ache, fame's cost. She kissed him softly. "Score big."
King Of Cricket
Prominente · Kynstra