Yep, same question. Wtf happened to SW ff?
man, such uninformative chapters must go in pairs
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what a letdown =(
at last - solid chapter! approved! 4 ch. before were nasty fillers with AT-smthing specifications and blabla
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should change ff title to heavy rain. because if always raining in here
dude why make everything so complicated? we don't need more drama
Let me know what you thought of this chapter. Did you enjoy it, or not so much? Your feedback always helps me make the story better.
In The Walking Dead as Itachi Uchiha ?! (TWD)
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Why is it good? Because i have no idea wtf will gonna happen next and i like it. + it is great that mc is not some savior or super jedi - he is average jedi (in force). But plot is good and mc is quite resorsful.
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writing is horrible you can read mc to say "hello" in first lines of a chapter to then he rant about something irrelevant and only next chapter we'll see dry answer to that "hello". Dialogues are as horrible as writing. No pace. It just hard to read - no substance only dust in the eyes.
guys in past comment sections were right. Lets stop here and start hoarding chapters. Goodluck and goodbye.
good day everyone. i have a suggestion for enthusiast readers and art connoisseurs to extend song (or make your own versions entirely) from chapter 418 (Doing his job), where mc mocking "hero" in his song. Write your version here in comment section to this "review" and copy/paste it in chapter 418 (doing his job) comment section, so everyone have a chance to enjoy your art and have some fun.
Blacksmith of the Apocalypse
Fantasy · Arkusar