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i seriously couldnt stop laughing at how retarded the first chapter was

i laughed my ass off when i read the first chapter. its so horribly written that i couldn't actually believe what i was reading. i recommend anyone read the first chapter. trust me, thats all you need to do. the author shows his asshole within the first chapter and you wont physically be able to read more without vomiting all over yourself.

pretty good for a chinese novel tbh. i dont know if the translator cut things out but i didnt see any nationalism or racism or anything like that. the story is fun without getting tedious, mostly, some arcs are a little boring. pretty faithful to the source material. the characters act like they do in one piece, no drastic changes to localise it for chinese audiences, or perhaps the translator localised it for english audiences when translating.. hard to say. pretty decent read for anyone looking for one piece novels, and a bonus if you have read the legendary mechanic or whatever is was called

its pretty good for a one piece fic on this website. a few critisms but most of them are just personal preference things and not objective faults with the novel. imo the devil fruit is boring and repetitive, author tried to be creative but just ended up copying abilities from other animes. and i really disliked the hxh arc. it seemed like a waste of time and introduced elements that shouldnt be in one piece (nen/hatsus etc) which i dont like. on that point i also disliked him summoning madara randomly near the end. For the most part i prefer when the system dosent introduce elements that break the universe in terms of power or other things.

I dont know if its a translation or if the authors english is a second language, but its pretty unreadable if you have an standards. its better than MTL, but worse than individual editing. the plot points are random and dont fit into the story well, author changes a lot of things that happen, but then dosent think about the consequences of those changes and makes a mess of things. the mc's actions also make little to no sense. the justifications for breaking the camera and ruining other classes point is just retarded. nothing about the changes the author made are logical.

Its AI translated im pretty sure. the writing is much better than MTL but its still clearly some trashy chinese novel. also, the AI translated the spells into proper english so you get the mc using fantastic spells such as "flames come out!" *vomits in mouth*

really good. wish there were more chapters. . . . . . . . ...................................................................................

there is no reason outside of selfish incentives for you to have posting this trash here. none. a random chinese novel (not even a fanfic so automatically you are just annoying for helping to flood the fanfic section more than it already is with Chinese/Ai/not fanfics) that is translated poorly. it provides no value and there are already MTL websites. if you truly didnt want anything, than i can only assume you have autism or something. plenty of posters with almost identical wording to you, they just wait a while before spamming patreon links.

if you don't like it when the mc gets insanely strong way too early (this mc is already slicing through mountains at 8 years old or something retarded) this isnt for you. its written reasonably well, so you dont have to worry about dogshit english if you wanna give it a go at least

i read 53 chapters and im pretty sure 50 were filler chapters. im amazed by how little happened with so many words. holy fuck so many useless slice of life chapters i wanna vomit

its a bashing novel. for those fortunate enough not to know what that means. its a novel written by disgruntled 14 year old girls that go out of their way to write thousands of words bashing the characters they dislike, often posted to wattpad/fanfic net.

the synopsis is useless, the origin story is rushed and lazy. the author changes the personality's of characters randomly (katara is okay with mc slaughtering teenagers?) and the smut/romance is dogshit. one of the worst stories on the site

if you want to call being on the same frame of reference overused thats fine. also, the mc doesn't need to be better than their elders, just their age group (at least for wish fulfilment).

written well. mc acts a little autistic due to merging? with the kaiju devil fruits personality. the story starts at the rocks era which is always fun to read. its a bit of a crack fic as the mc gains strength very fast and dosent focus at all on training. brief mentions of it if anything. if thats your thing this is a fun read .

its written well. i got to chapter 25 but the downsides started to outweigh the positives of the story imo. too many disgustingly broken au elements, the mc is too strong too early. the mc starts roleplaying as a shelby and an evil wizard from the lord of the rings, honestly its just cringe most of the time. just try to imagine an 11 year old acting this way and you would just laugh at how cringe it is. anyway, the au elements didnt add to the story, just made it worse in my opinion. personally i think this is a 1 or 2 star, but its written well and if you like heavy au with an op mc this might be for you