Knight_Noctis - Profile

what's with the cliffhanger? I don't mind, but it'd be prettying annoying if he keeps running his mouth and reveals something. Hate the fact that the guy is so emotional, and he's so attached to the trio. All the chapters were pretty much dialogue exchange between the mc and the trio

Have to say , for a chapter, this was a little bit pointless. It didn't add much to the overall story . I don't know much about the tv series Oc. But if nothing changes from the original story, then this chapter didn't mean much . Anyway, thanks for the chapter.

what a pitiful person

what's with the edgy attitude? He's supposed to be a hero ,not an edgy character. The way he behaves is just childish. I thought he had a previous life, doesn't seem like it.

you could write some chapters dedicated to mc's training. I mean, we really haven't seen much of his training regime after coming under whitebeard . He's already fought some marine, and coupled with his past memory, he should get to training. Also, the origin of his weapon is questionable . You can go on a hunt for a good weapon as well.

for all that monologue anoit changing bro.got scam , he could've make much more if just learn to code .

three deathly hallows have less force points than sorting hats ??

If you go that far into intangibles, any gu path had that much potential . Sword path can probably then cut through immortality and infinity. Fire path and ice path can probably burn and freeze time etc etc.So,I'm curious about the mc obsession with shadow path.

I respect his attitude, but he isn't the real superman or homelander. So I'm not sure exactly where he's getting his conviction from . I'm not a fan of this type of obsessed character as well , He can't really save everyone . He knows that, so I'm not sure why he's being unreasonable so much.

what is up with your mc ? speech impediment? I hope to see more conversations

enjoying it . Just curious where the story will go from sao

like everyone's already saying , for a translation, story's interesting, grammar is quite good but length of the chapter could be increased

slave mc of the system . there's. a difference between eccentric personality and insanity. Your mc isn't eccentric . His pretty insane and sometimes stupid . Doesn't seem like someone reincarnated