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Hile_Lawrence
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2022-10-29 Beigetreten GlobalAbzeichen 5
Moments 286
That is my writing a year ago. I will revise it, thank you for mention it.
"What the hell did Sir Tobias do?! Why did he should say that?!"
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
That is Old-English interjection
"Ƿā I'm serious, don't overdo it. At least don't attack his face; you'll get scolded by mom!" shouted Edward from outside the field.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
You can call this a retcon. I actually aware of that but I really need to strengthen the dramatic scene. So here is the answer, The determination of Felicia to kill herself, is strong enough to pierced Allen's skin, even though its not deep enough to hurt nor stab him.
"Allen..." called Felicia; she looked at his right hand gripping the blade of the knife.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
That is... something I really wanted to hear when I back. Thank you.
ch 420 The Strange Woman
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Thank you for mentioned. I will revise it.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
😮😮😮
ch 0 8 Chapter 8 : First Killing
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
For now, I will write at my own pace. Crafting a well-made story often requires numerous chapters to allow for editing and to prevent plot holes, so updates may be inconsistent from now on. However, I will still strive to provide updates regularly, trying my best to published it daily.
ch 411 Interim Chairman
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Thank you, I'm trying my best to update it per day.
ch 372 Unfold the Truth
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
:0
A cryptic smile danced upon Philippa's lips as she replied, "You will find out later." Her enigmatic response hinted at layers of strategy yet to unfold
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Yes, but only 10 days. Will be resume by this monday
ch 405 How it all goes
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Aah I understand now. I just revise that part because its a bit too edgy.
ch 399 Novatio investigative operations (5)
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
I don't understand.
ch 399 Novatio investigative operations (5)
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Updated, thank you for remind me.
ch 398 Novatio Investigative operations (4)
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Adfectus Reliqua, and Arma Carcerum
Her complexion was pallid, eyes as dark as night, concealed beneath the shroud of a dark elv veil
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Offscreen, the story would be dragged and very slow if I did that, so I decided to cut it.
The distinction from Kruglikov's incident lay in the fact that the other members lacked the same influence as Kruglikov. This dispute escalated into a duel, with points and patrol territory at stake. Ultimately, Allen emerged victorious.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Revised, please recheck. thank you for mentioning.
ch 389 Being Novatio
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Thank you for asking, but I am resting enough. The mispronounce is just my silly mistake when I revise the draft.
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Whaaat
ch 359 Allen Emmanuel Kent
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Oh gosh, I forget this is an unedited draft. Thank you for mentioning the mistake.
He wasn't alone; he were with a 2-year-old girl on his lap, and then a boy climbed on top of his head.
Raised in Dungeon
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence