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Story started very strong, ignore the others complaining about “nerfed abilities” because it is important for driving the beginning of the plot and the MC is very powerful (comparable to the avengers when he meets them). Unfortunately, around chapter ~20ish the author gave up and let’s ChatGPT write the story, all the chapters afterwards are total brainrot. I assume this is to more easily sell chapters but idk it’s a bummer. Still giving 4 stars because I enjoyed the beginning a lot, I’ll just pretend this was dropped after 20 and move on.

??? You clicked on “Hades in Marvel”, but you don’t like gods or marvel… didn’t read the story and left a poor review.. now we have to guess are you stupid, rude or just a child

Story is already complete on fanfic net called “three to backstep”

It’s a repost, one of the most popular fics on (fanfic net) called “three to backstep”

I’m very impressed so far. I give huge compliments to the author for having the balls to actually affect the story. So many mythology fanfics have a very powerful MC who ends up inconsequential to the plot, but you have done an excellent job of avoiding that and making an actually interesting Olympian god story. I know writing a story like this is very difficult so I’m rooting for ya! can’t wait for more!

It takes practice, these are just a few tips to disguise ChatGPT that I use at my job

Not really a fan of the chatGPT flavor. A few tips, to disguise it and improve the flow: in your prompt you can specify a high school reading level. At first it sounds stupid, but this makes it use less obscure adjectives and wacky conjunctions. You can also just prompt to use less adjectives and simpler sentences. You can also ask for different pacing in the prompt. You can paste the passage and ask for faster pacing during action segments etc. basically the only thing you shouldn’t do is paste your chapter and ask for something simple like “improve grammar”, because then the whole thing tastes like gpt.

Bleh, written by ChatGPT. Prepare, to read, thousands of commas, and delve into, the illustrious SAT vocab words.

This is definitely a weird one, not sure if the author copy pasted from another author or if this is a fanfic of another fanfic called rejected nephilem or something. Another weird thing is that he has his entire harem at the first chapter, it’s like we skipped the entire season and are starting at the last episode. Not sure why the author skipped the harem building part of the harem story. Last weird thing is that all the characters names are nonsense like the result of blindly smashing the keyboard. In conclusion: idk? I’m interested to know if other readers found it weird and bland or if I’m just outgrowing dxd fanfics, it’s been a while since I actually enjoyed one

I originally was going to leave a poor review, but you nailed all of the issues I had in mind. Therefore I shall instead leave a review on your review, five stars! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ You left such great constructive criticism and in a positive way too. I hope more reviewers will care as much as you

The writing quality is pretty good, but the plot is exceedingly slow and boring in my opinion. Ended up dropping because the author decided to develop romance with prepubescent MC rather than waiting for the academy or afterwards. I know the MC is reincarnated but kurenai and others aren’t so it was really distasteful.

It’s bad, I think the author doesn’t understand villain novels. The “villain” MC in this novel, instead of cutting off the “protagonist” with schemes and conspiracies from the dark, decides to commit violent and psychotic crime in full view of the public. This alienates every sane character and makes him look disturbed, but the heroine somehow swoons over this. I won’t mention the awkward writing because I think it may be a translation or ai, but this plot is like drinking poison. I like to read trash novels but I expect trash of a certain quality. I got tricked by the villain tag…

Least brain damaged WebNovel user

Highly talented author, excellent story so far. Mc has a really powerful kitsune pet (mind reading, supernatural strength, illusion, mind control, flame manipulation, assassination, etc.), hopefully it is used as more of a social character than as a deus ex machina plot armor device but I’m probably wrong. I think having a reasonably strong main character is ultimately more satisfying than someone overpowered that can win without trying, fingers crossed

Translation is acceptable. Story I s interesting and exciting, even with the nonsensical premise and Chinese tropes. Super short chapters though, which is understandable because this seems manually edited. And the translator doesn’t remove meta chapters where he makes announcements, so as of chapter 35ish I’ve read like 9 or 10 chapters. Some readers might want to wait for the story to develop before picking this one up. I got a little frustrated with cliffhanger city, but that also means I’m interested in what happens next

So when an author uses chatGPT to write their book there are two big rules you have to follow to avoid creating brain rot. Number 1: Don’t use ChatGPT to write romance, it completely fails. Author patches this by making the MC the most handsome in the world and have automatic aphrodisiac and mind control power, a tried and true classic by Chinese authors. Number 2: don’t use chatGPT to write dialogue. Author actually does pretty well with this, not sure if he manually writes the dialogue or just edits it carefully. But the author actually breaks a new forbidden rule that I have never seen before... HE USED CHATGPT TO WRITE AN R18 SCENE!!!! Never have I ever read something so unsexy and cringe inducing in my entire life, I literally could not look away because it just kept shocking me at how the ai thought an intercourse scene should work. It was like watching a slow motion trainwreck. all at once im confused, irritated, and thankful for such a unique experience. Would not recommend. Its in Chap26 btw

This is seriously bad, I couldn’t make it through the first chapter due to the serious overuse of chatGPT. There are some bad AI novels on this website but this is far and above the worst I’ve ever seen