Hey author. I have to say the storyline of ur book is generally good. But there are definitely a few issues I have not with the story or the world, but the grammar. The grammar in this book is objectively bad. I’m sorry to say this but I have to. The sentences are choppy and incomplete. You tend to miss connecting words which are imperative to the sentence. Respectfully you can’t use “English is not my first language” as a shield for criticism. I suggest you use grammarly or even ai to refine your work so it becomes more legible and comfortable to read. Otherwise it’s a great book and my recommendation to read it still stands.
Honestly speaking it’s a very decent work, i would give it a 8/10. Would be higher if not for grammatical errors (yes i know it isn’t ur first language but still i got to say it). System is interesting and i like the concept of being able to copy literally anything. Overall I recommend you should read it
That’s a lot of ranks
This is PMO ngl
Lu Sheng felt a bit regretful. These past few days, he had tried to follow the path of a cultivator, but without talent in that area, he couldn't even get started, even with the system panel, it was useless.
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
Foreshadowing MC integrating all three systems
"It's normal that we martial artists can't match them. After all, we are poor and can only follow the martial path exclusively, unlike mechanical transformers and immortal cultivators who can also manage some martial arts while training their own systems. Even though they use the fast-track methods, their combat power is still stronger than ours in the martial artist system. It's very annoying."
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
It’s bs translation, just run with it. Dont think
Lu Sheng was slightly surprised. Although tens of thousands seemed many, considering the Human Federation's population of nine quadrillion, it was extremely rare.
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
I mean it’s easier and less annoying than saying qi-blood every time
"In the era before the Human Federation mastered the Cultivation Technique, the Qi Blood Value of an ordinary adult male was 1 card."
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
Is that a spoiler or guess
The only thing accompanying Lu Sheng was a jade token he always carried with him, with the character "Lu" engraved on the front and "Sheng" on the back.
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
Ye honestly pretty reasonable amount
The population base has reached a terrifying 90 trillion people.
Martial God: Grinding from Mortal Flesh to Immortality
Science-Fiction · Daily updates of 50,000 characters to dominate
Respect gang, hella cool what ur doing here
"Oh, my child," his mother wrapped him in her arms. "It's not your fault. It will never be your fault."
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