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In fact, I didn't really like the story at the beginning, probably the first 50 chapters or a little more, they didn't feel alive enough. However, as the plot spun further, I became more involved and it became more interesting and more thoughtful. The main character began to develop better, became less afraid to interfere, and began to truly participate in events. However, in my opinion, there is still room for action, and a huge one at that - he could interact with the characters of the canon more often, solve their internal problems, make them happy and receive rewards for it. He could assemble the Uzumaki clan, take custody of Naruto, talk to Konan and Nagato, and so on. There is a feeling that he avoids using his system even by 50%, rewards are checked extremely rarely, tasks are completed only randomly as they go along, and not with a purpose. And I would understand if the system were more rigid, but no, in my opinion, the system in this fanfiction is genuinely good, it is literally created to give people happiness, but still the main character does not do it. Otherwise, at the time of chapters 327-328, I like the development of the main character and what he is going for. As a reader, I'm just annoyed by the obvious missed opportunities.

I think it's an interesting novel overall. The way the events and characters are developed and how they handle the situations is interesting to read. However, the fact that the main character has poor mental health is a bit of a turn-off. At the beginning, we see a spineless, mentally traumatized introvert who starts off in the apocalypse (he starts off very poorly, he wouldn't even have sex if the girl didn't ask him 10 times). As the story progresses, the main character gains strength and experience, but he doesn't change internally. He completely ignores the fact that he gets stronger through sex and makes his partners stronger, and after experiencing different girls, he still behaves like an insecure virgin, constantly self-flagellating and downplaying his own importance, regardless of what others say. Because of the main character, it's actually more difficult to read, and if we were to leave everything as it is but give the character more moral strength, things could have taken a simpler, more effective, and safer path for everyone. But unfortunately, the main character is mentally weak and broken by childhood problems and self-doubt, yet he is the leader and the strongest person... it's really disgusting.

Well, I've reached chapter 148, and I'm mostly disappointed. Despite the system, the main character remains a failure. He makes some improvements, but it feels like it's just an illusion for others, as he remains the same as at the beginning. I would have preferred some meaningful development, where he would improve his life, grow as a person, stop overthinking, become wiser, or address his other flaws. However, there is no such development, and it seems unlikely to occur. Other than that, it looks good, the system is good, as are the other characters, but the main character doesn't use it very well. So if you like the main character after the first few chapters and are okay with him staying the same, then it's fine, but if you're expecting personal growth and a spine, then no.

I've reached chapter 111, and I'm very disappointed at the moment. The system is good, the characters are interesting, and the concept itself is not bad, but a disgusting ingredient has been added to this wonderful cocktail in the form of the main character. He is foolish, constantly denying reality, ignoring what is happening around him, the impossible consequences of his actions, never delving into his own powers, and his character is simply repulsive. I honestly wish he would just die, because he doesn't deserve his strength, his money, or the women he's slept with. It's a waste on such a garbage hero.

Well, to keep things simple, I'll just say that it's amazing. The story of both worlds, the characters and their development, the psychology behind them, and the power progression system are all perfect. It's really hard for me to find any flaws, and it's the first time I've experienced something like this. However, I have two ideas that could be developed to improve the novel: the protagonist's sexual relationships and the classification of materials/items. About the first, I think it corresponds to the character of the main character, but not from a romantic point of view, but from the point of view of satisfying the desires of himself and others and naturally manipulating female characters. Several times it has already been mentioned that many female secondary characters are interested in him, some directly want children from him, and from the interaction with other characters it is visible that the main character also has such desires, although rarely. As for the items, apart from the world tree, I haven't seen any items with any ranks or anything like that. The main character always gets weapons and clothing made from "better materials" than before, and the various items he sells also have only some functional aspect. It might be easier to mention the ranks of these items as to what level of practitioner they are best suited for, at least in terms of weapons and armor. Materials are more complicated, but I think it would be useful, especially if the main character trades goods between worlds in the future.

In general, I really enjoyed it, especially the comedic part. Seriously, while I was reading, I had a smile on my face most of the time, or even burst into laughter. The only drawback I noticed and don't like is the main character's lack of awareness. She constantly catches hints that something is wrong and... ignores them. It's as if she's not living in the real world but in her own fictional universe, and her brain removes all the unwanted information to continue enjoying the reality.

Well, at the very beginning, the story was exciting. It had a relatively interesting romantic plot, although it focused more on the main heroine than on the main hero, but it was still engaging. However, as the story progressed, I began to feel annoyed by the fact that the main hero combined the qualities of a genius in work and psychology, as well as the archetype of an idiot who constantly ignored the clues around him. In all aspects, except for his work and the main heroine moral support, the main hero was a weak and fearful individual. And to make matters worse, when a series of revelations about the company begins, the entire story becomes a constant cycle of drama and despair, leading to more despair, and this continues for many chapters. As a reader, the story becomes nothing but a source of suffering, and I find myself drowning in the intensity of the events. While it's usually a good thing for a story to evoke such emotions, when there are so many of them, even knowing that things will eventually turn out well, I simply don't have the strength to continue suffering. I'm dropping it at chapter 159.

In general, I really enjoyed it. The romance in the story is cute and beautiful, and the characters are interesting. The only thing that bugs me is the uncertainty surrounding the main character. At the beginning, he is portrayed as a slum rat who will take any opportunity to provide for himself and his sister, but as he begins his journey as an Awakened, he suddenly develops a sense of pride and a lack of past thinking. And then, as if in an instant, the main character is no longer a slum rat character who is ready for anything, but some kind of novice swordsman hero who is sure that he will become great, and he will achieve everything and win everything and earn everything. He could ask the heroine for money, provide him with housing and education, show arrogance and cunning in this approach, as he did at the beginning of the story, and so on. But for some reason, he suddenly has pride, which is hurt by the fact that he is "unworthy." He is ashamed of his position, he belittles himself, and he limits himself and his sister's opportunities. Moreover, the main character himself mentions in a conversation with his sister that he would like to find a sugar mom who would provide for him and his sister, but when she appears before him, he doesn't even think about it. Even when they develop genuine feelings for each other, he doesn't take any steps towards her because he has developed a sense of pride. How can a man who, in his previous life, took on any job to support his family and all his brothers and sisters, a man who crawled through the battlefield covered in blood, mud, and shit, scavenging for scraps and finishing off the wounded, have such pride? In my opinion, the main character should be a little more confident and shameless in the middle and at the end of the story (at the time of chapter 80).

One of the most interesting novel that I have seen on this site. The only thing that upsets me is the lack of romance in the main character, as if he's doing it for everyone, forgetting about himself, which is sad.

My God, this is the funniest novel I've ever read, the number of funny jokes in each chapter is off the charts, and besides, it's the coolest power development system in the world. If the novel had a little more romance (18+) and much less other points of view, such as several chapters of reviews of character battles, which are usually not particularly interesting, it would be ideal.