trek_star

same

enjoyable story has sum things I've not seen in a hp fan fiction before has a few moments where it loses a bit of continuity and I feel like it could have been longer to flesh out serten things and have the MC's progression slowed down a bit to add more risk but is a great Reed if you want some Harry Potter

it's an OK story. wish fulfilment. I likes some things like the premis and start of the story but it gust went down hill some of the thing that stick with me is that I didn't like where the prasing totalitarianism as the best and good for all. and the story should have ended after the formation of the ascendancy I found other galaxy's story where uninteresting.