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this story has potential but the constantly shifting POV makes the reading flow unsmoothly. trying to figure out who's pov you r in is a pain.

The story itself start off alright and I was able to ignore the instantaneous learning of magic from the MC for a little bit, but as it progressed, it got worse. It involves A LOT of self bragging and repetitive narration of pas achievements the MC has done. I don't even mind all these as I'm used it it after reading so much Chinese novels, but what made this novel REALLY REALLY AWFUL was the fact that the MC's small achievements are made to be life changing and affected the whole world. Overall, it's good for when you just want to read to feel good about yourself, but story wise this is an awful novel that blends cliches and is very predictable. Im not saying it's trash, but I'm not say it's not trash either.

The fanfic is decent mostly mostly and it start off alright. The parts where got powerful out of nowhere and the fact that gods blessed him with the powers mad me cringe a little. i kept reading hoping for it to get better, but it literally keep getting worse with unknown modern knowledge keep being added to the story. If the main character reincarnated I would understand the knowledge but the fact that it's just John with the knowledge of the their made me not like this book more. How did a world that is literally in the middevil era creat hot weapons. The author just made it because of the fact that John can see all past knowledge, but the world literally had no advance knowledge before him and all his morals and characteristics is based off of a modern man's. The book started off shitty and kept getting worse and I'm on chapter 140.

the book started out wonderful, but around chapter 200 or so it went from a low magic world to a world where magic was everywhere. he's alreay OP, but he relies on the system for literally everything. there's no original thought. it's not constantly with the original story and the story goes off on multiple tangents about the side characters that feels like the writer was putting in random information.

the story itself is decent, I loved the premise when I first read it. The fact that the characters keep getting strong and stronger out of nowhere is what makes this novel trash. He literally has every cheat and he's still is getting more. This is just another chinese novel about harem and faceslapping with trash MC who has knowledge of storyline. There is no struggle, there is no obstacles, and it's just the MC being over powered and getting more random powers though out the stroy. I tried to stomach the first couple of chapters and thought it was going to get better, but it did not. It literally keeps getting worse. The story just serials into more of the MC and all the possible overpowered cheats he has. Even the start cheats makes me barely wanna read it, but they just keep on adding to it. The author sounds like a HUGE VERGIN LOSER who has never done anything with his life.

the story itself is decent, but the story progression is terrible. im 60 chapters in, and it keeps talking about all these abilities the MC aquire. That is all good, but there is no worthwhile interaction in the story, and the progression of the story makes no sense. Overall, the power system is a total mess because it talks constantly about the MC getting more and more abilities. It doesn't explore into the world or even go in depth about the environment. the only detail of the settings we do get is constantly shifting. It even copies power systems from other novels. There are literally no interesting events that happen in the 60 total chapters I've read. This story is made by a virgin shut-in who has not left the basement. If you're going to make a fanfic, stick to one novel and don't make it complicated.

This is a wonderful fanfic, from the story development to character interactions. After reading for a couple of chapters, it pulls you in and just wants you to keep reading more. I really like how the main character develops thought out the stroy and how he references cultivation novels for his powers. My only critics would be the fact that many religions of God's were involved and how it could complicates thing. I really like how the author monuvered though the different fight and now just get an unknown power out of nowhere.

Overall trash novel, I read the first couple of chapters and the main character is just a fucking pussy with system. he has power and authority but doesn't know how to use any of it. the author is probably a shut in who live with his mom and knows nothing about life. It's starts off with the main character asserting his authority over his uncle, but after that it just turned to trash. he is the lord of a territory and a novel and he literally does not do anything about his enemies. They magically start following and looking up to him after he beats them up with overwhelming strength. Just another trash chinese cliche novel. There only originality is the plot and the story sucks.

the MC has no original thought of his own. He is literally just using cheats to get though the story. At least do something less predictable. Basically after the first couple of chapter you can already guess what the rest of the book is going to be like.