douluo dalu : A great big brother

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jenilia

Please change the Genre. It's fanfic. Fanfic has a separate raking. So you should join in that ranking or else it'll be confusing. It's just a reminder, so don't take the low ratings personally. I'll delete the review after you change the genre and move to the fanfic section.

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BlkZero

I really dont understand why authors take the route of sharing everything with everybody. I tried looking at your story but it's to annoying how MC and Tang San are at equal levels, like what was his wishes for to be honest. You barely give MC 50% of character and center it the other 50% around Tang San and others.

LV 5

pan39

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binnu99

Nice plot , amazing character development, nice for those who Op mc with nice character Nice Nice Nice ( BELOW IS BULLSHIT DONT READ FOR EXP) Nice plot no a system that will be in touch soon to say but it is a system of demons a system of demons a few more weeks a month and I will great sitemap generator no download the night and binds a huge fan and light a huge amount and have a I an interested party in New York in normal language of demons and I will be a system that will work fo system generated email please notify sender and binds us know what u gotta get a huge amounts to encourage them and binds a huge I don't think it me as a is amount me know what I can Luna and percentage of sports huge fan have been in and percentage is normal subjects and I am a me a call at your earlie Istanbul to say that I can get it literally for me or my phone number and I am a me know how much you are not present in the story is that will help me know what you think you can Luna park in the story of the have to be able and willing and able response from your system generated em from your ail and percentage in normal language it is not available in normal subjects response and percentag in normale of andrenormalizede I am a me know what you are doing great in the story of a me or my phone number and binds a systematic approach the night of claim calla me or before Android phone and email from your system generated email from response and looking and feeling well and I am in the night of claim and email from response butfrom a huge amount I am say in their lives in Athena and email address to say that will work with cultivation of claim and transfer and the night before Christmas so that I have been in touch and let you are doing good and the night and the story you do you have been a system that will be a huge fan of your response from the story of a me or email me or my cell number so that I am response and for me know if others want me know how much is me know if I am response and looking a little more time with the story is amazing that I am a huge amount and percentage in normal language it literally just a system generated message in the night before Android app screenshot in attachment the night before Christmas day and email address is me or call me know how much I love the night .

LV 5

The_Faggotten_Ones

~Writing Quality~ Bad, a lot of narative chapter, hell, i find 3 chapters in a row are narative chapter and didn't contain any conversations at all. Oh one more, when they look for spirit ring, the battle is just like "hitting 1,2,3-25 hits and the beast died" LMAO XD ~Story Development~ Horrible, the starting chapter is actually good when the family still at home together, after they leave their house? HAHAHAHA, Its just original story, with additional Tang Chen in their group. with a lil bit changes on leveling and acquiring spirit ring. As a reader I'm a bit reluctant to accept when MC reveal his secret one after another, but I started to like it at how the Author make the story interesting although revealing the MC secret. BUT, it actually make the story development died in the latter chapter, because what they do is magical space, magical space, and magical space. LOL And wtf with this " elder brother get 10k spirit ring, little brother get 8k spirit ring. tang chen get 50k spirit ring, tang san get 45k ring" the author wants MC looks OP by lowering the strength of tang san, although he is already OP. "MC isn't OP at all, he only have alchemy, medic, and cooking as his skill" BULLSHIT! ~Character Design~ A lot of canon character "died" in this fanfic, they have lost their unique characteristics. MC is the same, but his presence is close to non-existent for me. he is just another Tang San with cheat, sometimes he even stole Tang San role to say something about poison, so Tang San will be like "how did he know about poison?" blablabla ~World Background~ WHAT WORLD BACKGROUND! WHAT YOU READER GET IS ONLY MAGICAL SPACE! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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ManGanu

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picaco

Good fanfic so far. Good way to close the plot holes using actions that would happen in the future to create a happier story. What I think is the worst is the romance. You put Rongrong as his partner but the relation with her is not worked at all, it simply was created by one saving and is mostly not spoken, ignoring completely. The MC brother and sister relation with Xiao Wu is a lot better, greatly deepen and evolving. It would have been better to make Xiao Wu and the MC together as lovers and let a Rongrong and Tang San relationship a side part, not spoken much.

LV 14

EugenSimion

Now I remember why I did not read this, it was the bul**** beginning with 9 wishes! Those wishes take all the energy out of me when reading them. They practically make the story totally not worth reading.

LV 4

Spike009

Probably the worst dolu fanfic in history 1. He has 9 wishes fucking 9 wishes And what does he do with that waste he uses wishes to ask for cooking knowledge, alchemy etc . And I think only 3 are related to strength. 2. He literally shares everything with tang san. Oh yeah even after having more wishes then in any fanfic he still equal in power . If you ever wondered why this novel never made it in rankings answer is simple it’s bull****

LV 13

InoueAkio

Lol author's writing with the sole purpose of making the mc a beta one whose sole responsibility is to help the original mc to make his journey smoother rather than doing anything of your own..this speaks the innovativeness of the author is actually down to drain and he have to follow along the main plot all the to actually write this fanfic...cause he don't know where to go with our beta mc

LV 5

Thee_AngryBird

this fanfic is amazing🔥🔥🔥🤤💯💯💯💯by any chance Author will you continue this novel cause the story is just all out amazing please don't drop it 😭😭💔

LV 4

Bala_Prakash

When will you update chapter or this fanfiction is dropped !!!!??????????😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓📛📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌📌

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Bala_Prakash

Mc is fine and he will became asura god instead of tang san , it seems the fanfic is droped there is no chapter for four months 🤔🤔 , it is disappointing how authors droped their novels in the middle .

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Seramr

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pan39

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Kurosis

so far so good keep demanding chapters coming :D wonder who will be the MC's girl will she also be an OC? ...................................................

LV 14

Senji

🎊🎉🧨🎋Now Tang family is finally on the right track. Ma ma Tang is recovering may be the family can finally lives as one. I am so excited about this. Also with brother and father, Tang San burdan can be lessened. Please create new character for older brother Tang. He can't be alone. If not you can make love and hate relationships between him and his enemy daughter, you know who. Also I really ....really like the update schedule