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Its a story about a girl travel to a new different country to build carrier and encounter different men and fell in love. And struggle to lead a good life.
Author note: I'm a new writer. And i need all readers help. if you think my story some some error. Then please give your reply in comment section. I will try my best to correct all my errors with you support.
And this cover photo isn't mine.
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Absolutely enjoyed the read! It has a lot of basic grammar mistakes, and a bit confusing to read, but it's a good read nonetheless (I recommend using Grammarly or prowriting aid)
There are some confusing paragraphs but could be improved with the help of these three, Prowritingaid.com, Grammarly, and GoogleDocs... Hope it help. But actually, as you spend more time reading, you could find the charm of it.
The plot is interesting. I am curious to know who the final winner will be. I am hoping it is her CEO. There are a lot of spelling mistakes. Just read the chapter before posting it once. Also all the male characters feel the same but with different names, maybe it's because there are only a few chapters, but try to give them more distinguishing personalities.
Hello, This story is very interesting. But here is some tip if you want to become a better author. Have you tried Grammarly or ProwritingAid. (You dont have to pay for it.) The story overall is really good!! I like the charactr development and not into cliche type of story. Keep it up!
I love the story, each chapter is so easy to read. The word in the story isn't so complicated. The flow of the story is also good. I love this!!
The story is interesting. It is definitely what you should consider adding to your collection. Well done author 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👌👌👌👌👍
The story' Is very great and very interesting . Your writing is good and you can make me feel like I'm the character . i can't wait for the next chapter
It is good and through its writing, though there are grammatical errors, you can still tell what the author means to convey. The intention is pretty clear. It's straightforward and it's not an issue, it's for a reason.
Hello everyone I'm the author of this story. This is my new book. Please support me and give me your ratings. Vote for me please. And give me your comments. So can I correct my errors. [img=recommend]
The story is amazing overall. The only thing that can be improved is that there should be more paragraphs and space. The conversation and details are all mixed up. I gave 5 stars only because I believe that you can improve.