A Tale Of Demons and War Gods

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0_Jordinio_0

Honestly, it's kinda sad to review your own story. But everyone else does it on here, even the top ranked stories. So may as well jump on the bandwagon right?

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amaturewriter

Would be nice if the MC in this FF didnt become a " Sheep " that follows nei lei.........hopefully he will be smart and not some perverted idiot....also no NTR pls...........keep him OP.maybe give him a ability similar to kyoka suigetsu?,,,,,,,,,,just dont make him an idiot that goes around training idiots........add some romance and fluff just build it.....and if harem keep it small.........just dont make the MC rapist [that vibe was really strong in chp 2].........anyway goodluck

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Bisaster

10/10, would read again. One of the few TDG fics that isn’t retarded and knowing you, never will be, unlike the vast majority of TDG fics on this site.

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Dorival_Sabino

U should really start or return to this story again Jord........................................................

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Damon_Morado

iIknow you haven't touched this one in a while but I was really into it and wanted it to continue so please save some time for this forgotten child 🥺

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santia01

¡¡¡¡Me encanta tu trabajo!!!!, puedes seguir subiendo nuevos capitulos para poder seguir viendo .

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Demonic_Mori_Jin

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Nigga_Lzz

I'm really loving the story I really hope it's not drop though------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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SkyLin

Keep up the good work. So far, everything is at a high level compared to other TDG fan fiction. So far, everything is at a high level compared to other TDG fan fiction.

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Skelly_Boi

Best fan-fic I've read in a while. The Mc is not retarded like others, and I feel like you have a lot of talent. Good luck on writing, xox. Ps. Good luck

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king_kold14

Excellent start to the story, with some nice background establishing and information about the mechanics of the stroy, its only on the 3rd chapter as of this review, but im waiting impatiently.

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SYIHAAKIRA

Hello there 0_Jordinio_0. I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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Dorival_Sabino

Still waiting do new chap's.................................................................... ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Justin_Richardsn

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TheFakeSloth

Excellent start!(not sure if ever continuing) One of the best TODAG fic's i've ever read. Of course you get extra points for including best girl Ning'er, don't know why everyone is obsessed with Ziyun in their fic's but i'm glad Ning'er is getting the screen(?) time she deserves. Also the way your MC is written is fantastic, no beta males here! Anyway, just wanted to review one of my favourite fic's i've read. So thanks.

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Rio_Bladimir

Simplemente fantástico espero que continúes y no lo dejes morir es muy entretenido................................................................................................................................................................................

I could have made the updating stability to 5 but just gave 3 stars... Mam this story is progressing so good so far and I like it damn much... This is Harem right? Coz if yes... I'M OVERJOYED!

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sllab

its a good story it is different from the usual TDG fan fiction and its entertaining to read ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_

This is amazing! Take all my money and give me more!