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" I will love you far and beyond------
If there exists eternity, I'll be there right behind you. For if by your side I find myself then where else could I be without you... "
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Excerpt:
" Who are you? Why do you keep following me!"
"...because it's you?" A certain shameless purple eyed stalker retorted.
" Why are you leaching off here for? Find someone else! "
"...because it's you!" the certain unashamed purple eyed leacher explained.
" Aaaahhh! Get lost you pervert! "
" Well how can I?...because it's y..." even before Wu Jun Jie could retort back with his shameless speeches, Jun Ai Nian had already taken out a knife to castrate him!
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° Who said only male leads have to be cold and all powerful? Nah...they could be subservient right?
° Who said a hero can't be a weakling?...Well, who won't like the idea of having a ML playing the role of a damsel in distress!
° Who said a male lead has to always stand atop general masses?... He could just be whiny little fellow that feels no shame in hiding behind his wife!
Well, when you have ---
A dominating female lead possessing a very ruthless and cruel heart, a person with multiple personality disorder (well not quite so), has a serious case of obsession with money over handsome hunks!
A mischievous, cunning and covetous male lead who acts cute (only in front of fl), has a serious case of typical ML jealously syndrome, is black bellied but a docile and filial husband through and through!
--- A novel such as this is possible!
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Not every fantasy romance is unreal. For Love has never been a fantasy!
Join in this fun filled sugery romance with a few fluffs here and a few thrills there with Jun Ai Nian and Wu Jun Jie whilst overcoming mysteries, schemes and thrills that lay in their paths.
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Ah Author here! Firstly, I thank all my readers for their honest feedbacks. Your suggestions and advises has helped me in keeping my shortcomings in check. Secondly, I wish my readers a hearty welcome to my book. Read and enjoy it, do drop by your suggestions and keep me motivated. Thank you! ❤ And thirdly, since I'm here might as well top up my ratings with 5 stars hehe.
Totally worth reading! I really liked reading this novel so far. The story development is awesome! The writing style is also so beautiful! Especially, I liked the character design. Guys, give it a try. You will not regret it. Good Job, Author. Keep going. 🤗🤗
Author here, there isn't much to speak about my work. I'll leave that upon you my lovely readers. Umm...just going to drop by some of my thoughts here~ As you see I'm rookie here. So bear with me and I would appreciate encouragement 😇 My book is basically a fantasy romance unlike many other novels you'll come across. I'll be sure to make it both thrilling and fluffy, funny yet wee bit teary, my characters would develop at it's own pace, not to fast or slow. I'll just leave their development to themselves and will be following their wish and make it known to you all😜😆 So give it a try and make my novel feel the love. Thank you 😇 ❤❤❤
Since the story just begun, there isn't much too review on. I'm waiting for more chapters to get a glimpse of the romance and character development. The fl seems interesting and I can jolly well say that she would b one hell of sassy woman! This story a little different might have different plot I'm more used to. I'm waiting for the ml, I can assume he might b carrying a big jar of vinegar along with him haha! Looking forward for more! 😊❤
Loving the novel. Guys try and read this one. The novel has weirdos and is funny. :-P I like this ml, he's that usual dominating all known type but a funny and silly one. And the character of fl is truly fun to read <3
Superb work author 🥳🥳 The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . I wish you do wonders in the upcoming times. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]
Alright,.after a week or more, I'm will give this novel a review. for your information, I only read it until chapter 7, so my review might be a little bias because you could have long improved your writing but, I only review what you are writing in the very beginning. I will apologize first. Writing Quality — 4 star story development—3 star Character design —3 star Updating stability —5 World background—2 star I don't know how to review your novel. I want to give you a few criticisms, but I realized that I could also be facing the same problems. I just hope that my review will not make you hate me. Alright, let's take a deep breath and get into it. I give you writing quality 4 stars because I don't see any problems with the grammar but, the way you write your story...It just, I can't put myself into your story. I just can't imagine what the MC is seeing from the constant monologue. The story is changing from 3rd POV and First POV which is fine, but, the world-building is too little for me to comprehend what the story is about. Because of the title and the tags, also from your summary, I thought that you are going to write the story in the monarch kingdom or in empires where the MC is a strong queen ruling over a great kingdom, feared by all the enemies and respected by her ally. No one including the MC herself would think that a man suddenly appeared mysteriously and attract the Queen attention and so on....bla bla bla so, I've prepared my mind to imagine and focus on what you are going to tell. But, the story turns out to occur in the modern world despite all the hint of fantasy which I don't mind, It's my mistake for having such expectations. I know you have the Idea, I do find your Idea interesting, but the way you want to convey your character's feeling is a little bit weak. From each chapter, I read, from the first to 7.. I feel like all the event that happened can be combined into 2 or 3 chapters but that's just my opinion. I'm not that great. because, the event just goes from this to that, the only things that make the story going is just the MC monologue and her little action. in short, I can't give any good constructive criticism for you because my lack of understanding to your story. All the rambling I wrote at the top might be useless. but, from your writing, I can see that you know how to combine the dialogue monologues and the action for all the characters, what you lack is what the MC or any other characters is actually seeing. because you are writing in both 3rd and 1st POV, describing the situation around her might not be too hard. this way, I can feel the emotion of your character instead of feeling monotonous all the time. that's all, I can say. I hope this review could still be helpful and don't turn us into an enemy
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Amazing! I love the author's writing style. Those emoticons made from special characters are really cute and refreshing though I would kinda suggest to reduce them by a little bit. Too much of a good thing will reduce it's value. Unlike the name suggests the story actually starts in the modern age. It seems to be a fantasy romance with supernatural elements. The protagonist seems really cool and likable. Do check out this hidden gem, it has a lot of potential.
I really love the story so far!! it's a well-constructed story from its arc, character, and even the storyline so far is beautiful. I love it![img=recommend] Keep your hard work!! Dear Author!![img=recommend]
Im really enjoying this story!!! Well done author 🥰 I really like the ML😍 I came from “How I became The Strongest Sovereign” and I saw your review! Thats how i found this book! Its amazing!!!! Definitely worth reading!
Hi, here is my swap review. Before I begin, I just want to say that this is just my opinion and I'm not trying to be mean or offensive. First of all, the title is really eye catching so congrats on that. The blurb is also interesting. Writing quality It's pretty good, no major grammatic errors or anything like that. I do suggest maybe experimenting with sentence length. However, it felt really dry because most of the time I was stuck in the mc's head. Please consider show not tell; a lot of writers find it hard balancing the two, myself too. But it is paramount that you get the right balance. I suggest writer Jenna Moreci's youtube channel. Show me the character argue with her father, show me the character's mom leaving. Don't tell me because it takes away from the story and as a reader I don't feel sympathy to her. I won't be able to feel that connection that makes me root for her and want to read just one more page to see what she does next. Story development It's the first time I have ever given someone a one star for this, and it may seem like I'm being mean or too critical, BUT, love, I was stuck with the Mc for 5 chapters and the inciting incident did not happen. You are just showing me this girl going to school, coming home, going to school. And that's 5 chapters of nothing happening. I know, but stuff is happening! Technically no, your character is not being proactive. The plot is not developing. I'm five chapters in and all I know is a teenage girl who has daddy issues dreams of this guy, who seems to be from another world? The dialogue also isn't being used efficiently. The voices of the characters should be distinctive. Character Design I really don't mean to be offensive, but I literally feel no sympathy for the mc. She's not being proactive, literally just complaining about how awful her life is and being a whiny brat. From the title and the blurb I got the impression that the main character will be a nice mature lady, or at least someone like you said, daring and mischievous and fun. Instead, it was a teenage girl being emo and overdramatic about her life. Instead of liking her and rooting for her, I just thought she was annoying. I know that sounds super daunting, but there's a simple fix to that. When you introduce your character, even if she's not proactive (doing something to move the plot along or get what she wants) you should pick her good qualities and highlight them by showing it. For example, is the main character kind and helpful? - Show her help a lost kid. Is the character a brat with a good heart? - Show her being mean to a shop clerk, then go and show a girl thanking her for helping her out with the clerk. The first chapter, you should cash in to the good/heroic qualities of the mc and build sympathy. As for world back ground, are we in modern society? What about this world the male lead I'm assuming is from? Why are you telling me the mc's family history in the beginning? to make her seem pitiful? but that works against you, you should show it instead (e.g. have an awkward family dinner). Think about ways to pepper the world background/history throughout your work and not all at the beginning. Dialogue is a really good way to show the world background. The emoji's are really cute, but don't rely on them to show how your mc is feeling. I will be really honest, please don't hate me, but I read a lot of novels and I've seen this sort of idea of a strong female lead and male lead that acts as a damsel in distress a lot. Maybe think of a little twist to make it more fun, your own little thing. Maybe make the male lead partially blind during the full moon and he gets in trouble because he forgets and that's how the female lead comes to his rescue and he takes a liking to her? I suggest that maybe dropping hints of their fated connection and use it as a reveal or a midpoint twist later on. Just a suggestion you don't have to do any of this. I recommend Jerry Jenkins. He has a free blog with so many free resources on everything, and a youtube channel. Anyway, I hope I did not crush you too badly. Wish you luck!
The story has great potential. The concept/premise is already there. It just needs a bit of fleshing out. The writing style is quite interesting. I've seen some traditional books with that kind of style before but not with emojis/drawings. It's creative. Seems that the target audience is of age bracket younger than me so in that aspect it isn't quite a match for me. Nevertheless, I still find it interesting. I think the author did a great job in capturing the vibe and the tone of the story. It's already evident in the first few chapters. She nailed it. Some other observations, I found some disconnect between the few chapters with the synopsis. Even the FL's name seems different. I wonder if there's reason behind it? I also noticed a change in POV from 1st person to 3rd person by Chapter6. I suggest to stick to only one all through out. :) All in all, I recommend it. It looks fun and engaging. Kudos to author. Keep writing. 👍
Here is my honest review, I hope it could be useful! Flow: Is very good, I can keep reading it without stopping. Normally I often caught myself getting distracted or overwhelmed with wall of text, but this one didn’t make me feel that way. It’s really good! Grammar: Is very good! No noticeable error so far. You didn’t use any difficult to understand word which is a huge plus. Poetic sounding difficult words sounds good but my mind having difficulty processing it and often I got distracted, so I’m glad you’re only using easy and familiar words. Humor: An overall fun to read humor! There are some moments that might be better portrayed without emoticon tho, for the sake of seriousness. Example was in chapter 4 when protagonist met the purple eyed guy and felt an ache on her chest. Character: Protagonist is both fun and relatable. Also, I like how you made the issue in protagonists life more apparent rather than just mentioning it. Example is in chapter 4 when she saw her dad’s car and there’s a note to tell her ‘don’t use the car, btw, have a good day!’ It really emphasise that her relationship with her father had quite a problem. I know it’s mentioned in chapter 1 that they had grown apart due to some reason, but showing it in events like in chapter 4 made the experiences more engaging! Tone: Chapter 1 had a sad and serious tone, so the sudden tone change into humor in chapter 2 kinda caught me off guard. But it’s totally ok and nothing wrong with it. Personal: 1. The random emoticons are really cute! 2. Protagonist is very emotional. I like emotional protagonist because reading about their feelings is very fun! Bonus points if it’s relatable.
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Wow! This is such an amazing novel! ❤️ Exciting every chapter! I hope you wont stop creating such an amazing stories! I'll support you! ❤️❤️
A lovely story to read! The author built up the story very well and made it very enjoyable for the reader. I had fun reading every bit of this story so keep up the good work!
First off, love the fact you used a quote at the beginning. Those are definitely my favorite things an author could do!!! Second, I love the reality of this book. This author portrays that in the very beginning, and I very much admire and adore that. I thought reading the introduction, it was a magificant beginning. Definitely in my library for sure!!! Can't wait for more updates!! I would like to add I am the user BellsandLexShow from the forum.
Honestly, I was a bit skeptical about this novel but I couldn't stop my curiosity to know why the queen emperor's wife is daring. Being suspense got my urge up so I decided to read chapter 1 and I'm loving it so far and could only wished there's more chapter as I don't want to binge read and then wait.
Worth reading the novel! The author has beautiful described the chemistry between the leads. I am already hooked to the novel until I fully read it.
Quite interesting... I'm not sure what else to say except it's good... Like its better than some other stories with a similar genre but still not at the top. It has a pot of potential, and you should definitely continue writing it.
So far.. I'm loving this book. One of the most appealing thing about this book is that the author has used a number of kaomojis and that makes it fun to read ! I as a **** reader find it really interesting and creative cuz it's something new for me..😅😆 Also the plot is gettingkinda interesting and much more mysterious as the story goes on.. The FL and the ML seem like a cute pair too huhu🙆️💖 Waiting for their interactions more often~ 🙆 Keep up the great work authornim ~~ FIGHTING !!! ᕙ(͡°‿ ͡°)ᕗ